Two Vibrant Hearts - Comments

  • pekigirl

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    I think this story is really interesting xD and kayla
    makes me laugh ahaha can't wait for the next chapter
    July 20th, 2014 at 04:59pm
  • gothique4

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    Damn that's what I call a spending spree. She must have spent a fortune. I love Kayla's joke about the engagement and wedding present. She's dangling Brian in front of Lara's face like a carrot lol

    Hahaha I think The General suits Kayla better than Lara. She's like a little dictator lol If she keeps forcing beer down Lara's throat she's going to get all drunk, and then who knows what's going to happen with Brian.
    November 4th, 2013 at 03:59am
  • DeficientlyObscure

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    I really like this :3 Can't wait for more!
    October 25th, 2013 at 09:01am
  • AvengedFanfoREVer

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    Loved the update!!
    More soon please!
    October 23rd, 2013 at 08:00pm
  • HanerJoy

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    hahahaha I was laughing so much xD specially when Brian said hello michelle and continued talking with Matt xD and when he said I'm just kidding I got a flashback of the interview where he teased Papa Gates lol
    October 22nd, 2013 at 03:55am
  • AvengedFanfoREVer

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    Liking this story.
    I personally wanted to slap Brian.
    Can't wait to see what happens next.
    Please update soon!!
    September 30th, 2013 at 07:09pm
  • HanerJoy

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    wow they spent a lot lol I wish I was there with them lol and Kayla is such a great friend :) I can't wait for the next chapter :D
    September 30th, 2013 at 05:50am
  • gothique4

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    Oh lord I wish I could speak to some of my clients the way Brian did to the douche but I don't think management would like it much lol

    I love the way that Brian Sr looks out for her, and had to giggle about him kicking Junior into next week if he tried anything. He'd better get his steel caps out :p
    September 14th, 2013 at 12:50pm
  • OMFGitsBeckiie

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    Loved the update :) I also love the relationship Brian Sr. and Lara have. He's so fatherly to her :) I can't wait for the next update, so please make it soon! ^_^
    September 8th, 2013 at 02:27pm
  • HanerJoy

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    I'm so happy for her promotion :) she deserves it :) and I'm very glad she has friends in there that includes her own boss in which she can count :) I can't wait for the barbecue :)
    September 8th, 2013 at 07:38am
  • Linzee_Gee

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    Im so happy this story is back! This was always one of my favorites. Update soon please!
    September 5th, 2013 at 02:29am
  • gothique4

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    I love this, but I'm curious as to what happened to Lara to make her so skittish around Brian. I can only assume that she was abused in some way bu an ex.

    I don't think Brian deserved to be stabbed with a pen but trying to shove his hand up her dress was just a wee bit forward lol
    August 25th, 2013 at 03:08am
  • HanerJoy

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    Poor Lara :( I hope she can get through that fear and give Brian a chance and I hope Brian understands she feels uncomfortable and don't give up on her like Kayla said.
    August 19th, 2013 at 07:18pm
  • HanerJoy

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    OMGGGGGG I can't wait for more :D and I laughed so much at Mr. Haner scolding Zacky xD
    August 19th, 2013 at 07:28am
  • OMFGitsBeckiie

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    Loved the update. I reallly want to know what Kayla is up to. Please update soon!
    August 12th, 2013 at 11:53pm
  • OMFGitsBeckiie

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    I'm really intrigued by this story. please update soon! :)
    August 8th, 2013 at 06:13pm
  • I'mDifferent

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    I love this so much! Please update again soon?
    August 7th, 2013 at 07:01am
  • I'mDifferent

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    I'm loving this!
    August 5th, 2013 at 08:15am
  • DiamondInTheRough.xo

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    Im still loving this direction! I love the changes, and and I cant wait to see what happens next =)
    August 4th, 2013 at 11:38pm
  • Mikey Way

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    It's off to a great start. It seems a bit more serious than the other one and a bit more descriptive, but I love it! Can't wait to read more!
    August 4th, 2013 at 10:27pm