Sand - Comments

I LOVE THAT PHOTO OF THE HUNTINGTON PIER. Seriously, that's where all my dreams are right now. And the seagulls just broing out on the beach. It's so pretty....
Anyway, onto the actual story. Kate and Nate hehehehe.
Aw, I love when Zacky's the friend who just wants to give everyone hugs and make them all better. Cutie pie.
Sex on the beach, kinky Baker! What I love the most about this is the realtionship that they both have together- they're both very comfortable with each other. The only thing that confused me slightly was the sudden realisation that they wanted each other, there was no back story behind that. It's something I look out for personally, so take no notice of me.
THAT LAST LINE. GENIUS! "I think I have sand in my ass" way to kill the mood Zacky!
Thank you so much for entering my contest :)

I loved it! That was so frickin hot hun wowww!

@ shootbackholywater
I didn't think of a practical joke, but that sounds great . I'm really looking forward to reading what you come up with ... hope it's soon xx

@ AJ9
Maybe some practical joke or something? Hmm ill see what I can come up with!

@ Kaaren Nafar
There may be a sequel soon but thank you for your positive feedback! In glad you liked it :)

Oh sorry. I just found out there is no next chapter

Oh sorry. I just found out there is no next chapter

See I almost never get through sex scenes. I mean, most are so… There’s not word to describe it, or maybe I don’t have one. But the thing is, I’d rather watch a porn video that read some cheap erotic junk. They just lack too much detail. It’s disgraceful. But this one, oh this one was good. I actually finished it. Good for you. I wish I could write like that. And please, next chapter please. I hope it gets really dramatic and dirty.

Right .... How about this ... I think Zacky should exact some sort of punishment on her ex which will lead to her and Zacky becoming a couple. I'll leave u to fill in the blanks . Hope this is ok .... Let me know f u can do anything with this. If not, I'll try and think of something better

@ shootbackholywater
I'll have another scan through it and I'm sure I'll come up with something you can use. I'll get back to u in a bit

@ AJ9
Sure! Tell me what sort of thing you want and ill write it :D give me a prompt? Thanks so much

@ shootbackholywater
That would be awesome but would you also consider writing a short sequel to this first? Please??

@ AJ9
Haha thanks! Maybe I'll write a sequel! I was thinking of writing a full length Zacky story with a different female character :3

Loved it! It was really good but I want more

Good luck xx