September 10th, 2013 at 07:16pm
Sand - Comments
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I loved it! That was so frickin hot hun wowww!August 19th, 2013 at 01:34pm
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@ shootbackholywater
I didn't think of a practical joke, but that sounds great . I'm really looking forward to reading what you come up with ... hope it's soon xxAugust 4th, 2013 at 05:38pm -
@ AJ9
Maybe some practical joke or something? Hmm ill see what I can come up with!August 4th, 2013 at 05:18pm -
@ Kaaren Nafar
There may be a sequel soon but thank you for your positive feedback! In glad you liked it :)August 4th, 2013 at 05:17pm -
Oh sorry. I just found out there is no next chapterAugust 4th, 2013 at 04:28pm
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Oh sorry. I just found out there is no next chapterAugust 4th, 2013 at 04:28pm
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See I almost never get through sex scenes. I mean, most are so… There’s not word to describe it, or maybe I don’t have one. But the thing is, I’d rather watch a porn video that read some cheap erotic junk. They just lack too much detail. It’s disgraceful. But this one, oh this one was good. I actually finished it. Good for you. I wish I could write like that. And please, next chapter please. I hope it gets really dramatic and dirty.August 4th, 2013 at 04:27pm
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Right .... How about this ... I think Zacky should exact some sort of punishment on her ex which will lead to her and Zacky becoming a couple. I'll leave u to fill in the blanks . Hope this is ok .... Let me know f u can do anything with this. If not, I'll try and think of something betterAugust 4th, 2013 at 12:57am
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@ shootbackholywater
I'll have another scan through it and I'm sure I'll come up with something you can use. I'll get back to u in a bitAugust 4th, 2013 at 12:41am -
@ AJ9
Sure! Tell me what sort of thing you want and ill write it :D give me a prompt? Thanks so muchAugust 3rd, 2013 at 11:58pm -
@ shootbackholywater
That would be awesome but would you also consider writing a short sequel to this first? Please??August 3rd, 2013 at 07:34pm -
@ AJ9
Haha thanks! Maybe I'll write a sequel! I was thinking of writing a full length Zacky story with a different female character :3August 3rd, 2013 at 05:51pm -
Loved it! It was really good but I want more
Good luck xxAugust 3rd, 2013 at 04:22pm
Anyway, onto the actual story. Kate and Nate hehehehe.
Aw, I love when Zacky's the friend who just wants to give everyone hugs and make them all better. Cutie pie.
Sex on the beach, kinky Baker! What I love the most about this is the realtionship that they both have together- they're both very comfortable with each other. The only thing that confused me slightly was the sudden realisation that they wanted each other, there was no back story behind that. It's something I look out for personally, so take no notice of me.
THAT LAST LINE. GENIUS! "I think I have sand in my ass" way to kill the mood Zacky!
Thank you so much for entering my contest :)