A Pool Boy's Secret - Comments

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1) oh my god best things
2) (I am so sorry but I'm really really good with finding mistakes/typos/whatever and I'M SORRY I'M NOT TRYING TO BE RUDE REALLY) "The house was calm, noise came from the television in Dean's brother, Sam's room." kinda confusing?? like maybe "The house was calm, nearly silent, just the noise from the television in Sam's room coming out." then a tidbit about like Sam liking TV IDK SORRY
and "With a gentle sigh, Deam reached over and put his hand on her waist and pulled her towards him."
ya know Dean, that m key gettin' all tricky on ya

Anne is incredibly frustrating and I dislike her very strongly.

Please update soon <3

@ Jefferson Starships

Thank you so much. Porn is wonderful. Anne is an iffy character. Some people will love her, others will hate her. I like Anne though, she knows what she wants. Oh me too. He looks damn sexy in a money suit.

I really like that you're so upfront about Castiel. That last sentence killed me. I am way excited to see more of this, I subscribed before. Porn is great, really.

Highly disagreeing with little dove. I hate Anne. What the hell? Rubbing all up on Dean. Gurl, he ain't interested!!!!!!

I love Dean being rich. I've never read that. I usually read broken!Dean AU's. This is SO GREAT because I can just imagine him in an awesome suit, wearing an expensive Rolex, gelled up hair. Woo, that's hot.

I'm super excited about some more Destiel on here! horrahh!

Only mistake I see is 'her mouthed cupped' :3 so, so far so good. This cheered me up. I can't wait to read more~. Feel bad for Anne though... Can't wait for Destiel.