John Doe - Comments

I love this. I clicked on it because when unknown people die, they are given "Jane Doe" or "John Doe" titles so I thought it might have something to do with death. Now after reading this, I hope he doesn't die. He seems like a sweet guy who's not sure how to behave around women. It comes off sort of stalker-ish, but as long as he has good intentions, I'm excited for how this story goes along. :)

Oddly I really like this story.
I have never read any story like this before and it interests me very much I can't wait to read more.

Maybe it's just me, but this story seems kind of creepy. Not creepy in a bad way, but it's very mysterious and this guy seems really interesting. I like that you wrote this in third person, and that you haven’t given the characters names yet. I imagine the guy is John Doe, from the title and all, which still doesn’t give him a name and I like that.

I’m interested to see where you go with this. It’s really mysterious and I really want to know what happens with your characters.

I like how short the chapters are, too. I feel like that adds to the suspensefullness of the story so that’s awesome.

Well done!

I am very interested in this story. Different perspective and all.

I like that you're writing this in third person. It really gives it a mysterious vibe, and it definitely makes me wanting more. Bravo!

I'm very interested how this will turn out!

I really really love the layout.
It's so different and idk, I just LIKE IT!
The font and the spacing is just on point.

And I really enjoyed the first installment, it definitely perked my interest! Keep going!