It's Fucked Up - Comments

Robynn9436 (100)

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I hope they find her soon!

November 23rd, 2013 at 05:28pm

Wkey97 (100)

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best story ever please continue to write more ^^

October 18th, 2013 at 10:31pm

AlexGrrr (100)

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You right I will do that and thank you :)

August 17th, 2013 at 01:18am

meredith.rose (100)

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This is pretty awesome! Its a delightfully different approach than most writers use when writing zak bagans stories. I only have one thing to say, put alittle more love into ur writing. You sentences are alittle robotic. Make them sound as if your talking to someone. But overall, this is amazing :)

August 16th, 2013 at 07:09pm

Robynn9436 (100)

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Great job!

August 13th, 2013 at 10:03pm

Robynn9436 (100)

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Great start! I'm excited to read more so I hope you update soon!

August 5th, 2013 at 12:49pm