The Things No One Else Sees - Comments

YES!!! love the two updates and can't wait to read the next one

ahhh your killing me by ending it when it turns good. Can't wait for tomorrows update

Reading this chapter with the song playing made it that much better, if that is even possible.

I love this story so much! Can't wait for more

Woohoo! Two updates in one day! And that last chapter was so awesome; I'm glad they're back to the serious flirting. I can TOTALLY hear those words coming from Lupul's (gorgeous) mouth. Loved it! Can't wait for more.

"you already have me," gahhhh. I love it! haha ;) I am so looking forward to more.

@ fall.lake
I considered letting him make an appearance. However, there will be a jerk from Lucy's past popping up.

@ Thatmom
Thank you! For the compliment and for not throwing shoes at me. :-)

@ FLSweet82
Thanks!

@ WallFlower09
Lupul might make the next move...

Love this story! This is a dumb question but does that jerk Dennis make an appearance?

Ok, I'll take your word about fixing them. Putting my shoes down now :) Love your storytelling.

love the new chapters!!!

ahhh love the update (and the songs)...can't wait to see what her next move is going to be

@ Kaly18
That might just happen! But maybe he'll want to torture her since she's been torturing him.

@ ceeaygee
LOL - Sorry! I'm a sucker for angst. Adult content will be coming up, but you might have to wait a couple more chapters. And then there is a plethora of adult content.

@ LoveGame13
Soon! Totally sexy, mushy, lovey-dovey happy ending is promised.

Maybe she should just throw herself at him and throw him for a loop

I understand that the misunderstandings will just bring them together in the long run, but enough already!! They need to come clean about their feelings for each other, and get to the adult content!!

I just can't. The tension is unbearable. I want them together so badly!!

@ in.the.clouds
She's resistant to getting involved with him because she's watched him go through so many woman and she's afraid she'll be just another one. And it really sucks when you date and then break up with someone in your circle of friends. Awkwards. So, she's lying to herself by acting like she can flirt with him and be buds but still act like she's a normal single girl who talks to other men at bars. But when he turns it around on her, she feels like shit. Lupul will sort it out for her in a later chapter. He'll tell her what she's doing and why it's the problem. And Lucy will actually listen to him. For once in her life. ;-)

Huh. Idk. I guess she's just stupid (no offense). I was convinced that she was a masochist and/or sadist.

@ rebeccanicole_xo
They'll be close again! Just a little bump in the road. :-)

@ in.the.clouds
You're totally right. And Joff will call her out and she'll realize what she's done before the end. Promise!

@ WallFlower09
They go to the concert. And maybe they'll do a little more before the concert comes around. ;-)

Ahhh! This chapter frustrated me more than it should have. I had a feeling that him flirting with that other girl would definitely backfire. And I felt like Lucy and Lupul were so close to snapping!

I don't know. I have mixed feelings. Games are okay; they help the story along, pull at some heart strings, etc. I think Lucy's games have gone on too long. I get that she's worried about getting hurt, but (cliche as it may sound) she's the one hurting herself. Enough is enough.