Iced Over - Comments

I really liked the prologue - and really can't wait to see where you take it! I'm not a true believer in love at first sight, but I do like reading about it. /sigh :) Subscribed!

Also somewhat unrelated - the banner picture is amazing!

It's nice. It's a bit melodramatic, but it's good.
There were a few grammar errors throughout, like "lead" should have been "led", and "seen" should have been "saw".

Right off the bat, what struck me about this story was the narrative approach. I thought it was very open and refreshing. The narrator is open and they have a unique style, which I felt drawn to.

I also love the descriptions that you used in this, especially the descriptions you used to describe love. I thought it was sweet, and nice to see somebody describing love as something other than a problem or ridiculous.

I think this was a good start. It draws the reader in immediately and keeps them reading until the end. It's hard to do that with a prologue but you definitely pulled it off. I'm subscribing. :)

This plot kinda reminds me of the Swan Princess where the Swan Princess is a swan most of the time except during a full moon or something when she turns back into a human. Sorry, I'm rambling about something not related to the story. XD

Anywho, I really love this story and can't wait to read more. :)