I also meant to comment on the chapter as a whole, but then got frustrated with Mibba. Nonetheless—
I just want to slap Vic upside the head right now. You can't just deny your feelings for someone for so long and then when you know they're about to leave, you change your mind and complicate the situation even more. You just don't do that Vic! Fuck! I'm just going to go rage quit now. And if he goes to stop Kellin, I give him permission to deck Vic. Ugh, Vic pisses me off so much
I don't know if you realize this, but in the Vic section where he's had a few already, you switched person. If it helps, the line, "No he wasn't! And why the hell do you care?" is where I first noticed it.
I just started reading this story and I have to say that it's completely and utterly perfect in every way!!!!!! Vic was a real douche for kicking Kellin out although, Kellin did lay three very enticing words on him. Update as soon as you can hun! =)
I think Vic didn't just let Kellin leave because it reminded him to much of the girl he loved and whether he has admitted it to himself or not he clearly loves Kellin and doesn't want to let another relationship go. That sounded much smarter in my head. Leah is freaking adorable!
She's cute :D Also I feel like that vic didn't let Kellin go because he likes him he just doesn't want to admit yet. He trying to force himself in thinking that he can never love just lust someone.
I just want to slap Vic upside the head right now. You can't just deny your feelings for someone for so long and then when you know they're about to leave, you change your mind and complicate the situation even more. You just don't do that Vic! Fuck! I'm just going to go rage quit now. And if he goes to stop Kellin, I give him permission to deck Vic. Ugh, Vic pisses me off so much