Meetings of Accomplishment - Comments

@ CartoonBanshee
Yes I know about punctuation that is because the only time I have to update is at like 3am because I have been really busy lately but I will try harder in the future

I was glad Benedict didn't feel insulted.

the new chapter is good, but in dialogue you miss out punctuation.

@ CartoonBanshee
Thank you so very much! Just about to update

@ Hummingbird;
I am actually just about to update and I would love your opinion on this chapter aswell!

I would love to read more (:

this is good :) can't wait for more x