I love this, can't wait for an update! By the way, I noticed in your authors note you mentioned that you couldn't italicize. On Mibba, you actually can, you just have to use BB code. For instructions on how to use BB code try a Google search or have a look on the Mibba forums. :3. For a quick guide, here's how to do it. please note that when you actually type this you'll need to change the < and > for [ and ].
Italics is done by putting this coding <i> (and don't forget to switch that for [ and ]) at the start of the text you want italicized and then this </i> at the end of the italicized text. When the story is posted, the code will disappear and the text will become formatted!
Anyway, great story so far and I love your descriptions, keep up the good work and please update soon! :)