December 19th, 2013 at 06:55pm
A Player With a Game - Comments
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Aww he's taking her on vacation away from homeDecember 19th, 2013 at 06:50am
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@ TheReverend'sProdigy
Thanks, haha. I had to make up for all the time I took to update. :DDecember 18th, 2013 at 07:02pm -
@ shortygirl
Thanks!December 18th, 2013 at 07:02pm -
Holy shit!! Didn't expect that. Update soon!!!!December 18th, 2013 at 12:23pm
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Well I wasn't expecting that to happen. Who is this hooded figure?December 18th, 2013 at 06:15am
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@ shortygirl
Lol thanks for the comment. I'll try to update todayDecember 17th, 2013 at 07:55pm -
Why do I have a feeling she's gonna get mugged?December 17th, 2013 at 06:27pm
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@ shortygirl
Thanks, girlNovember 14th, 2013 at 03:53pm -
@ TheReverend'sProdigy
haha, thanks!November 14th, 2013 at 03:53pm -
Loved the updateNovember 14th, 2013 at 05:44am
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Awe Matt you tease!!!November 13th, 2013 at 12:22pm
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@ Damsel Of Darkness
aaagh! Thanks so much. A' love it. lol. Thanks for keeping up with the story. :DNovember 13th, 2013 at 04:59am -
So I went and fell behind on your story, but as of now I'm all caught up!
I feel bad for poor Arabella. I wanted to hug her when she overheard those women gossiping and saying that Matt was two timing her with that waitress. The stranger at the bus stop was nice and I can't help but wonder if he'll pop up once again... I'll have to keep reading to find out!
When she finally got home--or near home--and slapped him in the face, I was like "Yeah, you go girl!" hahaha. I know at this stage she doesn't really know what to believe and honestly at this stage he hasn't given her reason to think he's playing her, but I just can't help but feel he's too perfect and that she's actually correct in thinking she will just be a conquest to him... I hope I'm wrong, however.
The health scare was surprising. I'm glad that Matt took care of her and got her to hospital, but at this stage I'm still unsure if he's genuine. The latest chapter with the ex's return was... odd. I mean no offense, I just mean it was odd that his ex-wife showed up randomly at his new girlfriend's house, with the intention of getting him back... it was just a strange turn of events. Haha.
But I do agree with you about not using real life partners in stories. I don't use them either, I just make them up. It does feel a little disrespectful and even a little creepy to use their real life partners, well to me, anyways.November 11th, 2013 at 03:19pm -
@ TheReverend'sProdigy
Thanks, love! :)October 21st, 2013 at 04:22am -
That's really sweet of you :) great chapter!!October 19th, 2013 at 02:14am
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@ shortygirl
Thanks so much! And yeah, I feel like that's really disrespectful.October 18th, 2013 at 01:50am -
I don't like it either when people use the guy's wives names. Lisa needs to go away though.October 18th, 2013 at 01:48am
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@ niall sunshine;
Thanks for the comment, girl :DOctober 18th, 2013 at 12:36am -
OH OKAY
lisa
if that is ur real name
u better go
or elseOctober 18th, 2013 at 12:14am
Thanks for the comment.