August 7th, 2013 at 04:49am
"Anyone who were around the two for more than twenty minutes would swear to you that Jess and Alex hated each other with every fiber of their being." who was, not who were.
Apart from that very minor mistake, this was an AMAZING read. Not only do I love All Time Low, I love having a cute little fluff in my life opposed to the usual sad and depressing stories I come across on mibba. Out of all the stories I've read on mibba, your descriptions have won the prize for best in my book. You use such interesting and unique descriptive words that make the read that much more enjoyable. On top of all of these lovely qualities, I also like the layout as well as Alex and Jess' relationship. I feel like the hilarious little fighting only proves how much they love one another and I find their entire relationships absolutely adorable. You have quite the lovely piece here, and I love your writing style. Thanks for the good read :)!
Thank you for fixing the grammar! I was torn between which verb to use while I was writing it. And thank you so much for the major compliment; I love your writing so this means a lot :)