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  • midnightmssuki

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    @ hockeylove719
    I tried to leave it as a week long fling but my inner happy ending wouldn't let me. But like you said, if not in fan fic than where else? :) Glad you enjoyed.
    August 23rd, 2013 at 12:50pm
  • hockeylove719

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    Ok so versteeg is an old favorite of mine...minus the long hair lol which you included haha

    Overall I liked it because I didn't have think myself and try to figure out gaps or read between the lines lol so thank you. I liked that she was stubborn and that she just wanted a rebound fling. I like that she left a note too because it probably meant more than a teary sappy goodbye...I hate those lol
    I also liked the end...far fetched but hey it's fan fiction lol. But I still liked the end and how it was grossly perfect (not in a bad way lol).

    So winners should be posted by tomorrow at some point :)
    August 23rd, 2013 at 07:00am
  • defaultmemory

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    @ midnightmssuki
    Probably, i bet listening to them would be more interesting then auto correct when trying to curse.
    August 21st, 2013 at 04:37am
  • midnightmssuki

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    August 21st, 2013 at 04:06am
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    @ defaultmemory
    I feel like that line sums up 99.9% of all hockey players. It is high on my list of lines that will live in infamy. :)
    August 21st, 2013 at 04:06am
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    He’s a hockey player; surely he has heard worse. In fact, I guarantee he has said worse.”

    Pretty sure this is myfavorite line lol
    August 21st, 2013 at 04:03am
  • midnightmssuki

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    @ Thatmom
    I'm glad to hear you liked this. I'm on the fence. I don't love it but I don't hate it.
    August 21st, 2013 at 02:18am
  • Thatmom

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    Loved this!! You never fail to suck me in with your writing!
    August 21st, 2013 at 02:10am
  • midnightmssuki

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    Thanks LadyF!! I must have stared at the same three paragraphs for a month before this came together last night and this afternoon.
    August 21st, 2013 at 12:15am
  • Ladyfiaran

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    That was a sweet little one-shot, great job Cool
    August 21st, 2013 at 12:01am