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  • HowardHogan

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    December 2nd, 2023 at 05:01pm
  • megpie12

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    Love it! I think it would be kinda cool if the guy knew her husband and everything but that's just me. And he didn't ask to soon. :) keep up the great work.
    August 8th, 2013 at 07:52am
  • fascination.

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    Before you even said anything about the two's relationship, I could feel the love in just the first two paragraphs so that was amazing. Plus, army stories always pull at my heartstrings so A+ there. I knew something bad was going to happen to him. Ugh. I just knew it. It's so sad that so many amazing men and women lose their husbands/wives/loves ones because of war. Especially when there is a child involved. It's so sad that that baby will never get to know his wonderful father.

    I really love this story and you definitely made a very enticing first chapter. I think it's extremely well written as well.

    The one and only thing I didn't like about this story is that there is no layout. Such a beautiful story deserves a layout! I think you should definitely get one so your story will have that extra awesome touch.

    Your writing is impeccable and I love this heartbreaking story already. Great job!
    August 6th, 2013 at 08:52pm