So I stared reading this last night and I'm already dying for more. This is the cutest thing I've ever read and I'm very much in love with those two boys. So please keep going! You're a fantastic author who definitely gives me the chills!
Oh, do layouts usually correlate with quality? I've... never actually looked at that feature. Maybe I should, though, if the lack of one gives a negative first impression.
I'm glad you liked it and felt Toby was believeable! I have some similar issues, though less extreme, so I've been kind of using some of my own traits as a base which I think helps. Plus research. It's fun!
Definitely will be updating, every day if I can. We're on the home stretch now :D
Oh my god, okay just finished reading all the chapters. One, I love how well written this is, and that I gave it a chance despite always being a little weary of things without a layout. Two, I love how you've written Toby you've written such a great character that believable has an anxiety disorder, and it doesn't go away in crucial moments. Three, please, please, please keep writing this, I love it so much.
@ luck_dragon Yes, that's the only time I find it okay to touch someone's hair. Cause it's just sitting there, looking touchable, you know? Like, if you didn't want it to look so soft, you should tape rocks to it or something.
True, but I'm a bit slow and only realize things make be awkward or uncomfortable after I do them. It's the reason why I don't really get embarrassed talking about my embarrassing occurrences. And I've probably touched people's hair too many times without their permission. I don't really haven an excuse though.
@ Baby-I-like-it97 Am I really? I made at least one person cry. Would an angel do that? Probably... canonically they were pretty freaky. Eyes all over the place. But thanks!
@ stunning.reality; I have no idea whether that streak's going to go out to 4... probably not. Hmm. Did you notice the cats? They were especially for you!