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@ fascination.
@ hellokittymusicfreak
Thank you so much for your comments! It has made my day! An update will be up shortly :)

Wow, this is just... amazing. You've definitely captured my attention!

I haven't read a Twilight fanfiction in a really long time and it's so refreshing to see one; especially one so well-written! I won't deny that Twilight is my guilty pleasure .

Also, your layout is superb!

In addition to be a fanfiction that many people enjoy, you pack such a good punch in the very first chapter. You definitely keep the reader guessing about what's going to happen next! Is Jacob going to be able to save her? How is she going to die? How does she know when she'll die? It's all such a weird concept and it definitely draws the reader in greatly.

In addition to that, I love your description of life and how it relates to the sea and I definitely agree to you on that.

Lastly, I love how you have no grammar/spelling mistakes throughout. You have quite the wonderful story going on and you definitely have yourself a new subscriber :D!