This story is really interesting to me so far. I like reading Teen Wolf fanfictions every so often and I like this one a lot. I think Arian is an interesting character that you created quite well. We could tell her personality right away from the beginning of the story. I remember being a little bit like Arian when I was younger.
I think it's interesting that her father has something to do with the werewolves. I haven't really seen a story like that on Mibba and I like that idea. Usually people in Teen Wolf fanfictions just randomly move to town without connections but I like that Arian has a connection somehow.