Cock Whore - Comments

@ Mrs. Shadows
awww! you're very velcome! c:
hehe I'm glad I could make you happy! :3
yeah, I thought you must have read quite a lot before you wrote anything. ;w;
all my pleasure! <3

feel free to multiply this! haha

@ My-Mental-Fiction
Awww thank you so much, that means a lot. I'm smiling like a big ol fool now haha. I'm glad you liked it! Yes I know it's hard to believe it's my first, I guess it's because I've read quite a lot of slash before I wrote this lol. Anyways, thank you so much for this comment it just seriously made my night and now I'm all happy

holy fukcing hell. The new Queen Of Bratt-smut may come to the podium and recive her crown!!
seriously super awesome! AND THIS WAS YOUR FIRST?!
OMG!! THAT'S AMAZING. ._.

Oh my god! Right! When i first heard the album i was screaming like crazy and I fell in love immediately. There were a few songs I wasn't sure about but it didn't take me long to fall in love with them too. I was obsessed with it for awhile but now I've become obsessed with Halestorm who I just recently fell in love with but I still listen to some A7X too because I love those boys. Oh really? Its awesome that you respected her and didn't post it even though I would love to read it. Yes, post one pretty please lol *gives you the puppy dog eyes* Ill spam it with comments :D Awws *blushes* Well thank you I hope to post more Bratt stuff I'm the future since I'm starting to get into writing slash. Oh yes, I need to work on my update for Seize the Day. That is my goal for the weekend sincey daughter will be with her great grandparents for the weekend but we'll see. I also have this other Bratt one shot I'm supposed to do for "her" contest but I think I'm just going to drop out. I'm still going to write it though because I have an awesome idea for it though. Plus that story in talking about in the blog" I'm discussing with my partner about Matt and Brian possibly being gay so that should be awesome too. Oh yes its almost one here so I will be going to bed as well. It was nice meeting and talking to you too. I'm glad we started talking and I hope we can talk more since you're pretty awesome. It will be nice talking to a guy since this site is flooded with girls lol. Night!

@ Mrs. Shadows
I love almost all the songs, I play them repeatedly at home. I did write a Bratt. What I did was come to Mibba as annon to read my kink (A7X) and found a story I loved. I asked the author if I could do a rewrite and she said yes. So I did. Out of respect for her, I told her I wouldn't post it here because I didn't want people comparing the two stories. Anyway, I might try to do another Bratt to post here. Would be fun, but I really like your Bratt and that dynamic. Yeah, I better get to bed. It's 2am here. thanks again and looking forward to reading your other slash story soon. Great meeting/talking to you.

@ AJM1
Yes, shame on you! Lol just kidding. Aww I'm glad you like it and it means a lot since you are pretty good yourself. This was my first slash so I wasn't sure how good it would be. Thank you for your comment it made my day :D I know right! Picturing Brian bent over the desk with his sexy ass in the air and Matt spanking him, so hot! I love me some Bratt. You should write some Bratt stories, I would read them. Mm yes, the goal was to make it super kinky and sexy ;) I'm with Brian as well I would suck his cock anyday and plenty of other things, just saying. I would be needy for Matt too, I would be begging him to fuck me. Public sex is so hot, I love it! I'm actually listening to the new album now. I love Crimson Day its so beautiful and I can relate to it so much. Anyways, ill stop rambling now but thank you for thos comment again, it made me smile.

PS, makes me want to go listen to A7x new album! Or watch some vids of them... <3

I read this before and didn't leave a f*cking comment? How dare I!!! lol Gave me another reason to read this.
OMG you can write slash like nobody's business. This role play in front of others was Wayyyy HOT. I LOVE BRIAN AND MATT TOGETHER.

You did a superb job with descriptions and the sexy/hot factor. This was a joy to read from beginning to end.

Brian being spanked was merely ONE of many highlights and of course his eager, lusty desperation for Matt. Anyone can read this and see how much he wants Matt.

Quote= “Oh fuck yeah, fuck my mouth so good,” Brian groaned out, his mouth watering at just the thought of having his massive cock in his mouth, fucking his throat like no other man could." End quote

Oh Brian, my mouth waters for it too! :D That scene... just... thud. iz ded.

One more thing, Dominant Matt and needy Brian are so sexy.

@ NeverWakeMeUp
Aww well thank you. Now you have me smiling over here like a big idiot. Luckily no ones home but my daughter who is sleeping right now. I feel so happy that you took the time to come and read this and leave such a gloriously long comment. Why thank you haha, it was my first time and I had to get some guidance from the slash masters, Zacky Vengeance; and RachTheBat_

Omg right! If Matt stripped in front of my class, just *dies* and then add a naked Brian to that *dies all over again* Yep, you gotta love the shy, innocent little Brian, well at least it seems that way at first until Matt has him bent of the desk, pounding in and out of him, exposing him for the true cock whore he is haha!

OMG GIRL! YOU ARE MAKING ME LAUGH.

THANK YOU DADDY, MAY I HAVE ANOTHER!

Loved that!

I know, either way is pretty damn hot. To see Matt and Brian all over each other in reality, just *ovary explosion* I love me some Bratt <3

Oh believe girl I understand. The image was clear in my head as I wrote it out and it really had me going. Sh, don't tell anyone but I had to go take care of myself after writing this.

I know, the goal was to make it as kinky as possible and I did just that and beyond haha! I told you, my mind is dirty, twisted, and all kinds of fucked up haha! Yep, our minds definitely think alike ;)

Aww this was great girl and I am so happy that you took the time to read and comment on this even though you didn't have to. You're point was definitely made. Again, you made my day so thank you again for this.

OH. MY. GOD. ARE YOU FOR REAL?

So I took a short break from doing my paperwork for school and I wanted to check out your writing because you're so awesome and I was interested in some of your stuff. HOLY CRAP! I could NEVER write slash smut that well! I haven't even tried because I feel like I would suck so bad at it!

Let's just start with Matt stripping down naked in front of an entire classroom. YES PLEASE! Let alone the whole timid/shy Brian that was in for it the entire time! Then when Matt called Brian out and made him strip down, OMG *fans self here*

OK, the way you described Brian bent over the desk and the coolness of the metal etc.. OMG, I can't stand it! THEN the spanking! THANK YOU DADDY, MAY I HAVE ANOTHER!

I still don't know what was hotter, Brian sucking Matt off and Matt fucking his hot little mouth or Matt sucking Brian off and Brian coming out of the sub role. It was all just too much! So friggin hot!

Then the visual of Brian taking it up the ass while Matt pounds away at him.... OMG, you don't understand what that does to me. Holy shit! The thought of Matt fucking him while he strokes himself......UGH! I CAN'T STAND IT!

And then this:

“Tell me who the fuck you belong to!” Matt smacked his ass again.

“I belong to you!” Brian cried out.

“Who’s my dirty little cock whore?” Matt hissed.

“I am!” Brian chanted. “I’m your dirty little cock whore,” Brian moaned loudly like the dirty little whore he is. Matt’s dirty talk never ceased to turn him on and send tingles through him. Just the sound of his voice in that low, sexy voice sent shivers down his spine and the sound of his loud, commanding voice never ceases to make his dick grow hard as well. Brian loved to be dominated and there is no one he would rather have dominate him than the man behind him who knew just how to drive him crazy and make him weak in the knees.

Then to have Matt come in Brian's ass.... OMG we have the same dirty mind and I'm so happy that I'm not alone!

So I know I'm nowhere near as good as reviews as you, but I hope I got my point across that I LOVED this! OMG, I can't.... I just can't right now. I need to go take a cold shower. FML. Oh, and

Morri e fui para o céu slash......................

@ Mrs. Shadows
Hetro, Im not a big fan but I'll read it just for you! A d yesh Im fierce ;3 cause Im a fierce bitch XD and yesh I'll work on it babycakes XD I like it when you boss me around ;3 *purrs* XD lol

yes it is a good holy fuck

@ StacieIerogeance
Is that a good holy fuck? Lol

is all i can say

is all i can say

holy fuck

Matt looks him over, taking in his muscular build and his long brown hair that looked soft like silk. He just wanted to run his fingers through it. The boy had a pair of chocolate brown eyes that Matt could easily get lost in. He wanted to see those eyes dark and glimmering with lust as he fucked his brains out. His eyes wandered down to his lips that were thin and looked oh so soft. He found himself imagining the boy’s lips wrapped around his cock and he fights the urge to groan loudly, his cock already growing slightly hard

That is a gorgeous description of Brian and I love how you focus on his hair and eyes, a lot of the time people will talk about his jawline and cheekbones, so it's good to see variation <3

I am actually shocked that was your first slash one shot, it was expertly written, I thought you were an experienced slash writer! Well done omg. You write really amazing sex dialogue though, so well done, I really love your writing and I hope you do well in the contest, it was great reading this, thank you for linking me to it. I was so enthralled all the way through I couldn't even pick other descriptions out to italicize xD
xoxo

Yep, there will be two versions, a hetero and a slash tehe Ohh, it looks I have myself a fierce lady I like that. Yep, I can't wait to find out, ugh!!!! You need to get to work on your entry so I can read it young lady haha

@ Vengeance_of_Shadows

@ Mrs. Gates
Oh dear lord another one shot HOTTER than this!!! I just died inside btw way and grrrr they better back the fuck off m'lady or its going down rofl, and we'll see whomever triumphs in the end and lol NOM NOM NOM XD killed me lol