Two Against the World - Comments

I think Sid and Matt are so cute interacting with each other.

Pretty sure my indifference towards Janine turned into dislike with this chapter. I think it mostly had to do with her practically forcing herself onto Matt, even if she didn't do anything more than push him up against the locker and touch his cheek. Also my sympathy for Matt just jumped off the charts too. Poor guy. Great update!

Twice would be great :)

Twice would be great :)

Twice a week would be great to me.

Ok so I like that you revealed a bit about the past with Zacky but the suspense is starting to get to me lol. I wanna know how they know each other! :) I like the sort of flirtiness with Matty too. He's a big old teddy bear!

Just putting it out there that my opinion of Janine has dropped a little. She's more obsessive than I realized. And I'm also wanting to know how Sid knows Zacky. The wait on that is killing me.

Also there's some point in this last chapter you said something about being out of ear reach that needs to be changed to being out of ear shot.

Poor Paige was so nervous! I'm still dying to know how she knows Zacky.

They already know each other. How? Did I miss something?

I love it!!! I love how you depicted him!! ♡

So I have somehow missed two updates, and I'm not really sure how. (I most definitely did not have my nose stuck in a book the last couple of weeks though. I'm lying) I'm caught up now though.

Janine's definitely something, and I do feel bad for Matt, especially since there's not a way for him to avoid her. It sucks to be in his shoes. At least Janine's got some courage. Paige should probably follow her steps, you know without being obsessive to his face. I'm also kind of wondering if something's going to happen with Izzie and Prince Charming. And what'll happen with Sid and Matt because she is starting to develop a crush whether she wants to admit it or not. Can't wait for more. :)

Mr. Baker needs to get his booty to class lol! I like the way the characters are developing.

I think that Janine is funny they way she's clearly obsessed with Mattie lol. Great update!!!

Sorry it took me a little bit to read the update I've been super busy. I'm sad that she misses her mom so much and I also can't wait to see the friendships with everyone develop.

“But I’m not stalking him! I just like looking at him!” Totally can relate to that sentiment. Pretty much can just relate to Paige in general so far with this chapter. I also loved the banter with Matt and Brian after hitting Sid with the ball.
Quick question though. Like how old are the guys supposed to be in this? I'm only asking because if you're using their actual birthdays (which I'm assuming since Jimmy mentioned he was terrorizing people since 1981) and they're fresh out of high school, then you should take out the Skype reference because Skype wasn't released until August 2003. Then again, I might be being nitpicky. Great update though. :)

They finally met some of the guys. Great update!

Great update. I like how much detail you put in everything because it makes it easier to picture. ;)

I really like where you are going with this story!! I'm excited to see how things pan out and I figure out how everyone ended up together!! Update soon!

Loving this story already! Excited to see where it goes.

I'm very interested to see where this goes.