Up to chapter 5 now and I'm remembering why I love this story so much!!!! Honestly, it's one of the best stories I've read on here. It just needs to be published. Seriously. It's so good
@ MCRLUCY thank you so much for the comments! i'll definitely check out your book when i have a little more time. my first semester of my junior year at college is officially in full-swing, so between writing and the reading required for my courses i'm a little booked up (no pun intended), and I'll keep your new story in my subscriptions. I'm always looking for new reads.
Anyway! Thank you again for the comments. I love getting feedback so please, please, please continue!
The pleasure is sincerely all mine. Wow; you 're a busy lady then. Well done for even writing. Thanks
@ MCRLUCY thank you so much for the comments! i'll definitely check out your book when i have a little more time. my first semester of my junior year at college is officially in full-swing, so between writing and the reading required for my courses i'm a little booked up (no pun intended), and I'll keep your new story in my subscriptions. I'm always looking for new reads.
Anyway! Thank you again for the comments. I love getting feedback so please, please, please continue!
Again, I cannot articulate enough; this is a good! Chapter 2 introduces Cal perfectly and your characterisation of him hints at mystery. Actually, I love al you characterisations so far. Excellent
You need to publish this! Already, I'm seriously hooked and I've only read chapter 1. You write perfectly; your spelling and grammar are faultless and the story flows very well. I really think this needs to be in print and believe me, I have first hand experience of self publishing. My first novel 'Good For Nothing' is available to buy as a "proper" book and as an ebook through amazon. You can read some of it on here.
I've actually just posted the very first chapter of the new novel I'm working on, 'Shout The Call' so if you ever got a minute, I'd like to hear what you think.
Seriously though, blatant plugs aside, this has me hooked already. Brilliant