August 22nd, 2013 at 05:54pm
Hello!
I really don't know where this is going, but I am curious as to why he didn't speak out. .
I hope you are going to give a flashback story, or something . .
There's not much to go on here, and I really can't say anything other than this.
I am going to follow your work to see where the course of events lead him to. I also love the name 'Xavier', as it reminds me of X-Men!
Keep on writing . .
~ Verona :)
Haha I love x-men too!!! :P
Thank you so much for your comment, I wasn't going to do a sequel originally but now that I've had someone else's persective I'll definitely do one!!
I appreciate your critique very much and I'm glad you like it enough to want to know what'll happen next :D