More Specifically, Me Maxine - Comments

@ JagkBaraFuks
My mom has a friend named Lisa I think but she's not like evil Lisa

@ Sarah's Butterflies
That was why I thought you started with that name.... cause you just cAn't like the mother especially when her name is lisa

@ JagkBaraFuks
Because Maxine's mom is the bad guy! She cheated on Alex with Pete Wentz, why do you think Razor nearly killed him with the freaking bolder she keeps in her purse, plus she hurt Maxine as well!

@ Sarah's Butterflies
But you made her the bad guy though! Plus it's just easier to hate the name lisa, but Idk Harper seems to fit better

@ JagkBaraFuks
I guess Harper since we all know I really don't like Lisa

@ Sarah's Butterflies
Which name will you be sticking with?

@ JagkBaraFuks
Yeah, I didn't realize that at all until I finished the story but if you remember the chapter I'll go back and fix it

Um I think you changed her mom's name part way through the story... in the beginning her name was lisa but then you changes it to Harper??

Anyways I loved this amazing story ♥

@ jperry2013
Thanks so much for reading!

Mm, I think you should write a mystery pov! I really love this!

@ beautiful creature
That's a good question I wish I could answer, because I don't even know.....and I'm the one writing it. But I can tell you that in chapter six you may be laughing through out it, because I'm still writing it (Took a break yesterday) and I showed parts of it to a friend and she was cracking up.

<3....why is alex trying to make it a puzzle?....

THAT WAS KINDA A CREEPY MESSAGE. BUT THANKS FOR UPLOADING SO SOON. LOVED IT AGAIN. BUT I LIKE RAZOR ALOT I FEEL WE COULD GET ALONG. SO YOU MADE ALEX APPEAR HUH?....THANKS I LIKE HOW YOU MADE HIM AND JACK MARRIED I THINK THERE LIKE THE CUTEST COUPLE EVER. I THINK THEY REALLY SHOULD BE MARRIED THERE SO CUTE AND CLOSE. MY MOM DOESNT WANT ME LISTENING TO THEM BECAUSE THERE 'GAY' AND BECAUSE IM MIXED WITH BLACK AND WHITE AND SHE WANTME LISTENING TO LIKE 2 CHAINS.SMH. NO THATS NOT MUSIC.

@ beautiful creature
Don't worry I'll update first thing when I wake up tomorrow or maybe tonight. I'm writing chapter six right now. I hope you like Razor because her personality will really be coming out in the next few chapters. You know what? I'm going to upload the next chapter right now.
I just write what I like to read, thats why The Forgotten Five and this one are about the topic. I'm also going to upload another story which will be called The Broken Rhythm which is you read I hope you enjoy it.
Also with this fic I'm adding my life events into it and making Maxine's friends and mishaps similar. Like in chapter three where Maxine is spinning around and hits Tyler, that really did happen.

THATS IT?...LMAO IT WAS REALLY GOOD BUT I NEED MORE!!!...ALOT MORE SO PLEASE UPDATE SOON. I LIKE HOW THIS ISNT ANOTHER TOPICAL ALEX OR ATL FANFIC ITS LIKE THEY DONT DATE OR LIKE EACH OTHER BECAUSE THATS HER DAD. BUT I REALLY WANNA KNOW IS WHY HE LEFT.

@ JamieAllOver.
ATL does exist in the fic but they will be more prominent towards the end and for Razor she actually resembles one of my best friends, just not related or friends with the many listed famous people in chapter 4. Some of the many experiences in this has actually happened such as when Maxine starts to spin around in the hallway and bumping into Tyler (Who is also a friend of mine) where it hurts. Along with Tyler and Razor being some of my friends most of Maxine's friends resemble my real ones as well, like Harmony and Wizz being twins. I plan to make this as real as possible to make it seem like there are real people that people can relate with or with there problems, example is me being similar to Maxine. And here I go rambling on about things.

okay just so i know i'm not missing anything here, ATL doesn't exist, right? but u g h 10/10 would kill to be at least half as cool as Razor????? even her name is perf sighs

@ beautiful creature
Its up :)

@ beautiful creature
Yes Alex is her father and you have to wait to find out, I'm not giving out any secrets. I'm writing chapter five right now so I'll post the next chapter in a moment. Thanks for reading

NO COMMENTS?!?!?!?!.....WELL I LOVE YOUR STORY....BUT I HAVE A QUESTION IS ALEX HER FATHEROR IS SHE GONNA RUN INTO HIM ALONG THE WAY?....OH AND ALSO UPDATE SOON!!!!!C: