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  • luck_dragon

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    @ fiction246
    Thank you!
    September 13th, 2014 at 01:35pm
  • fiction246

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    I hope they can bring Seba back!!! Can't wait for more :) great chapter!!!
    September 13th, 2014 at 01:33pm
  • Dragonlove

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    Awesome
    September 8th, 2014 at 12:33am
  • luck_dragon

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    @ Dragonlove
    There will definitely be more chapters! This story is actually complete, just in need of editing. I think there are only a few more chapters left.
    September 7th, 2014 at 11:39pm
  • Dragonlove

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    Will there be more chapters?? I really liked this one. Very Happy
    September 7th, 2014 at 10:47pm
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    @ Izzywhispering
    Haha, okay!
    May 6th, 2014 at 04:00am
  • Izzywhispering

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    Ok. Well, if you ever decide to make that a completely other novel, tell me, because I'm all too fond of this one already! :)
    May 6th, 2014 at 03:56am
  • luck_dragon

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    @ Izzywhispering
    Well, it's possible, but the story has actually been completed, just not edited, for probably over a year now. I have other projects that I'm more keen to work on. Pursuing the story that far would be a whole other novel.
    May 6th, 2014 at 01:23am
  • Izzywhispering

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    Oohh. Ok. That helps to clear questions out of my mind. However, instead of ending the story to deal with Seba, couldn't you (in potential) make the story longer by tying in the advanced alien race's downfall, or worse, Sam's culture's downfall?
    May 5th, 2014 at 11:32pm
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    @ Izzywhispering
    Sam's people don't know that much, just that a more advanced society is using them to clear worlds so that they can expand their civilisation.
    May 5th, 2014 at 10:12am
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    You are absolutely welcome. I love how eloquently you put things, and how you mix the present with the past and the future. However, I should like to know more about these drones. I (as far as I remember) don't think that there has been a lot of explanation of/for why they are in existence/destroying planets.
    May 5th, 2014 at 02:50am
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    @ Izzywhispering
    Thank you, I'm glad you like it :D
    May 4th, 2014 at 11:24pm
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    I love this story. Sooo much.
    May 4th, 2014 at 10:08pm
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    @ luck_dragon
    Good. Purely academic I can accept :)
    May 4th, 2014 at 01:40pm
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    @ fiction246
    Diego's ace. His interest is purely academic :D
    May 4th, 2014 at 01:20pm
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    Something is up with Diego. He is looking at Kias too much for my liking :P looking forward to more :)
    May 4th, 2014 at 01:16pm
  • Hey Jude

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    @ luck_dragon
    Could be!
    May 3rd, 2014 at 02:47am
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    @ Hey Jude
    Maybe they are real. The whole premise is that there are infinite numbers of other worlds out there. Maybe I just have psychic powers and can see what they get up to. Orrrr maybe not, haha.
    May 3rd, 2014 at 02:45am
  • Hey Jude

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    I hope everything goes alright! Also, I love how realistic your characters' emotions are. I'm reluctant to even call them characters because they're so real.
    May 3rd, 2014 at 02:31am
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    @ luck_dragon
    .......I love you.
    May 3rd, 2014 at 02:22am