Waken the Fallen - Comments

"Right... Jimmy and Brian go back towards the wall and the fence, look menacing... scary, Jim, it means scary... Right, Johnny stand in front of but to the left of Jimmy, your left, dude... Hold the baseball over your body and place it in your other hand... Zacky stand next to him but to the right of Brian... no you're not fucking ballerinas... hold the bat over your shoulder."

Oh man, I love your sense of humour! Matt is being really childish, picking fights with Brian, really? I think they should all have a threesome and get it over with.

Awe, poor Mattie. I really love this story! Please update again soon!!

I feel bad for Matt, he's still pining for her, poor bubby! But smashing the TV up and being an ass is not realy the way to go about it XD

I had to chuckle at the way the other three crawled out like little mice when the other two stormed off haha.

I can see why Val is how she is, her boyfriend's ex is going to be in close proximity to her AND Matt. It probably doesn't even matter to her that Em doesn't want Matt, though if she knew Matt was still in love with her, she'd feel in worse, its the fact that his ex is there, it's make me feel uncomfortable too.

More awkwardness to come I predict! More soon please muffin! :D

Well, this is going to be awkward. I don't blame Val being insecure and not overly happy her boyfriends ex... the girl he still seems to assume is the love his life is in such close quarters with him. Very uncomfortable situation.

I actually feel a little bad for Matt... I mean, she says she never forgot the others and missed them, but when it comes to Matt, it's like she just cut him out and didn't give a damn about him. While all this time he's been pining for her... ouch.

Looking forward to seeing what happens next.

this story is absolutely wonderful. incredibly well written and totally engaging. i love the humor and the story line!!
so now that Val's on the bus i can't wait to see what kinda shit is gonna be stirred. should be interesting!!

this story is absolutely wonderful. incredibly well written and totally engaging. i love the humor and the story line!!
so now that Val's on the bus i can't wait to see what kinda shit is gonna be stirred. should be interesting!!

Damn, they'd better hide the steak knives as Val's gonna be gunning for Emily.

I pictured Short Shit as Yoda, and I don't think I can ever get those few seconds back again lol

of course val will be mad because maybe she knows matt is more in love with emily then he is with her and i wanna lean my head on brian's chest, body, pecs anything like that

whoa man i wouldn't want to be inbetween matt and brian when they are mad and I knew it matt was still in love with her *does a happy dance* I hope even with matt's feelings they can tryto be friends and hopefully they don't get drunk around each other because things could happen

Well, that got crazy, fast! I mean, I get that Matt's not overjoyed at her returning and dating Brian, but sheesh. He overreacted a lot, in my opinion. I understand he's not over her, but still, acting like that is just childish and pathetic. I can't see this tour going smoothly whatsoever... although I hope they find a comfortable medium.

It's nice to see the boys are happy to have her back... they'll definitely be caught in the crossfire, though. Hope the drama doesn't get too crazy!

I love this and what a great start.

Awww Matty hasn't got over her at all. I can see plenty of dramas coming! Brian's gonna get his panties in a twist that Matt's in love with his girlfriend, and I can't wait to read more of the shitstorm coming.

And i love Jimmy so much - he's just such an adorable huge ball of energy :-)

awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww poor matty you can tell he still loves her

*sock, omg!

*sock, omg!

Aww I feel bad for Matt, he obviously hasn't gotten over Emily at all. Bless his cotton cocks. I love Jimmy!! He's one big ball of fun! I can sense a lot of dramas and awkwardness in the near future, especially now that Emily and Brian will be sharing a bunk! I really like the name Emily by the way :)

Aww what did the TV do to you Matt? No need to punch the poor thing! XD

I can see fisticuffs happening between Matt and Brian very soon, Matt probably making a play for his ex, Brian getting all huffy. I love it!

More soon :D

Can anyone say awkwardd! XD
When Brian finds out she used to date Matt, he's gonna be pissed. And when Matt finds out his ex who ran out on him is now dating his band member, he's gonna be pissed too! Everyone will be pissed! Except Jimmy, cause Jimmy's ace! :D

I'm thinking lots of dramas are afoot! Looking forward to more! :D

Hahaha I love this already! “Would someone please tell me what the fuck is happening here? How does my girlfriend know you bunch of idiots?" Best line ever, I can't wait to read the rest:)

Aww, that was a heartbreaking goodbye scene. Poor guys and poor Matt. I know she was doing what she felt was best by breaking up with him rather than trying to do the long distance thing. Especially while they're so young, but it was still very sad. But I have to commend her for having the strength to leave everyone she loved behind to follow her dreams.

Ooh, now she's dating Brian. Well, this is going to be awkward! Haha.

The relationship between her and Brian is very cute. They're playful and fun, whilst still appearing to be very affectionate and loving. It's adorable.

Ahh, Brian is so behind. Hahaha. Jeez, I think I can foresee some massive drama's occurring between these three... I can't imagine Brian is gonna love that Matt is her ex or that Matt's gonna love that Brian is her new boyfriend. Complicated, to say the least.

Looking forward to seeing how you spin this

Yay, new story :D
What a sad first chapter! D:
Poor Matty. How could leave such am adorable face behind? xD
More soon please!

Looks to be interesting, I can't wait to see where you go with this.

More soon, I hope?