A Candle in the Dark - Comments

ALL RIGHT
I'M DONE
I DO NOT LIKE THEM AT ALL
AND IF THAT GUY TALKING TO ASTRID WAS BRADY I WILL BE SO ANGRY
that is all
i'm very upset

caring does nOT GET PEOPLE INTO TROUBLE
ASTRID
YOU'VE GOT THE WRONG IDEA
LET EZRA CARE OK
BC HE LOVES U
HE REALLY DOES

actually i kinda like Jack ehehe oops
so if he makes a move on her it's okay
and i might even ship it for a little while
Jastrid / Astrack (tbh i prefer Jastrid)
BUT ANYWAYS
poor Astrid :((((( she needs to let someone in ugh my heart is breaking

HELLA
I AM FROM THE ORIGIN OF THAT WORD
WOW NORCAL SWAG WOOT WOOT \m/
okay Ezra you need to make a move okay
bc Astrid is as hot as her hair and someone else might make a move on her
and i won't ship them with her (as hard as i ship Ezrastrid / Astra)

New to Mibba and just read this and its AWESOME!!!

aww, i love how things are turning out between them (((:
they aren't moving fast which is one of the things i love so much about it; they're starting slow as friends even though they have romantic feelings for each other meeps

WOW
BRADY IS HOT A'F
wow good job Alex i realized i spelled curiosity wrong
fuck my life
ANYWAYS
I AM REALLY EXCITED BC I CAN FEEL THE BUILDUP
THERE IS SOMETHING BIG THAT'S GONNA HAPPEN AND I AM SO READY ((or maybe i'm not tbh we'll never know))

HAHAHAHAHA OH MADDIE IS PERFECT
but i'd love to get to see how she and Brady met ((((:
also, would you happen to have a picture of him? just out of curiousity c:
but man, do i think that Astrid's plan to stay away will fall out bc lbr loOK AT EZRA
JUST LOOK AT HIM
HE IS ATTRACTIVE AS FUCK OKAY HE IS PORTRAYED BY ANDREW GARFIELD
also i am kind of looking for more zombies but also for more Ezrid / Ezrastrid / Astra??? (((((: like all mashed up ehehehe

ASTRID :((((((
LET EZRA'S OPTIMISTIC LIGHT SHINE THROUGH U PLS
wow okay that was a weird comment but anyways
I CANNOT WAIT FOR THE NEXT UPDATE

AW PUG OMFG
I LOVE PUGS SO MUCH EZRA LET ME LOVE YOU AW AW AW
o damn deep Ezra too god damn why is he so perfect
he seems like such an optimist ehehehe (((((: it's a nice balance to Astrid so far, i hope it rubs off on her!

HAHAHAHAHHAA GOOD ONE OMG
EZRA
FORGETTING SEEING ASTRID NAKED LOL REAL GOOD JUAN
oh, when he'd been looking at something else ;))))
I'M SO EXCITED FOR THINGS TO PICK UP EEEEK!

REALLY EXCITED FOR THE NEXT CHAPTER MEEPS OMG

HI YEAH, I really really love this story. The only thing I have to comment on it is that in chapter three, you called her Maggie but after that, she was Maddie. I knew it was the same character but still, it could be confusing for others. You only seemed to have called her Maggie rather than Maddie in chapter three. But yeah, other than that. REALLY LOVE THIS so please update soon, thank you very much. I'm in love with Ezra already.

Very good so far :) I'm looking forward to more.

aw omg commenting is the least i could do okay (((((:::
THIS STORY GIVES ME THE FEELS OKAY
Ezra stop being so awkward and make a move ok
Astrid is gorgeous and she will soon be a hot commodity as soon as everyone at the camp meets her

OH ASTRID
YOU ARE MOST CERTAINLY NOT A LIABILITY ;)))))
oh gosh Ezra needs to stop being a silly, awkward boy and just ask her out or something idk

Ezra really is not subtle at all omg
maybe it's because they have a surplus of males and are running low on females idk either way omg Ezra don't ogle her so obviously

MAGGIE ILYSM YOU'RE PERFECT
but oooooooh omg Astrid u get to see the hottie mchot pants at the camp

but damn
Javier is hot hot as a tater tot

AWWWW EZRA'S ALL PROTECTIVE BROTHER OMG
why do i feel like javier's gonna come up more oooooh