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  • Asphalty

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    Why, thank you! Very Happy

    You'll just have to keep reading ;)

    And thanks! I actually didn't make it though =P I took it from the layouts page.
    August 26th, 2013 at 07:26am
  • Verona Viridian

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    Aha! Haha . . I liked this chapter!
    I don't know what you have planned for this story though . .
    I wonder, "is there a romance creeping up amidst the zombies?"
    I love the layout by the way! I don't think I told you that the last time!

    ~ Verona :)
    August 26th, 2013 at 05:13am
  • Asphalty

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    Hi! Oh, my! Your comment really brightened my day and gave me hope to continue writing! For a second, I began to doubt that people would appreciate this, but your comment changed my mind. Thank you so much -I want you to know how much I appreciate it!

    Yay! Golden star!

    I will continue writing and thanks for the feedback! I guess you'll just have to keep reading for the answers to your questions.
    Wink

    I will use the double space now that you have expressed your concern. Thank you so much!
    August 24th, 2013 at 04:52am
  • Verona Viridian

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    Hey there!
    I just wanted to tell you that I am enjoying this so far. Ah zombie apocalypse!!!
    Often times, I am a true fan of horror, and I feel that this genre isn't really appreciated widely. Your story is really well written, and I couldn't place any errors just by looking at it! So, I present to you a 'virtual gold star' for that! Very Happy

    "He searched for hope even though he also pushed it back, knowing his need for life on a seemingly dead earth." Oh my! That sentence was just extraordinary! I am really curious about his 'need' now . . What could it be? What makes him go on, when there is nothing to live for?. . Personally, I would've given up easily, but I am weak! Wink

    One more thing . . I would really love it if you used double space to separate the paragraphs in the second chapter. It would make reading so much easier . .

    Please do keep on writing . .

    ~ Verona :)
    August 23rd, 2013 at 06:30am