Passenger - Comments

I just found this story, its amazing! you shoul make it into a full story it would be awesome!!

This was really great! I love the different emotions in this, how she was upset from her ex and then Chris's annoyed nature at almost being hit by her car and of course the amazingly passionate lust betwixt the pair. This was really awesome and well written! :)

wow this was amazing! I really loved how you described everything with the perfect words. This story had it all. It has cuteness, hotness, and it's funny as well. Chris is one of the sexiest man alive and he would be my exception too as to give him a ride if he was a hitchhiker. The layout and the banner look absolutely gorgeous and I love the name of Sirena. The sex scene was hot. I want to see what happens next and I'm interested to know if they will see each other again. I love your writing style because you managed to give a lot of details which gives the reader a much more depth of the characters and the setting. Great job! Loved this!

Okay, first of all, sorry for taking so long to comment on this. Second of all, gorgeous banner and layout! I just want to touch his face....and other things.

"All These Things I Hate" good song choice, I love that song!!

Ugh, I live in Arizona and let me tell you unmerciful is the perfect word to describe the sun out here. It's friggin' brutal, so I can relate to Sirena already LOL.

Dear god, she almost killed him!!! Love your word choice, because I am just dying laughing as I picture big, buff Chris Hemsworth scurrying out of the way of some crazy woman driver LMAO.

Upon her exit, her face rammed right into something hard, yet soft. She reached out holding on to it for balance and when she looked startled mocha gaze peered into a mix of distressed and irate cerulean. Amazing description here! Irate cerulean *fans self* because I'm melting.

Oh and him almost getting hit totally reminds me of Thor and the way Jane kept whacking him with her car, so very nice, nostalgic touch.

Haha, I like how he's all are you okay, good, cuz I'm gonna bite your freakin' head off now.

Blue heelers!!! Yeah, I would've asked the same question because I've never heard of that before.

You gotta admire a chick that's not afraid to back down from a dude who's like triple her size. I like Sirena, she's got a lot of moxie.

Mmmmm, such a yummy description of him.

Low key, huh? I see what you did there.

Awww, Chris offered to drive. He's such a big sweetie. Then he gave her his hoodie, let me die from all the cuteness! I honestly want them to get married already and they haven't even kissed yet.

Oh my goodness!! Hot, steamy, sweaty, sultry, fogging-up-the-windows car sex!!! Can I get a hell yes!! Hehehe, I love how this is titled Passenger and she took Chris' sexy ass for a ride, literally. Then when he took over

And then a sex marathon ensued. This is just a match made in heaven, okay? They're upset about parting ways and so am I. Don't leave each other, noooooo!!!

And the way you tied the prompt into the ending was brilliant. This was your first CH piece and it was incredible!!! You did an amazing job, and I wouldn't mind seeing a part II to this. They need to meet up again, they were made for each other!!

Holy HOTNESS!!! This was great. Loved all the detail.