I'm not the biggest fan of stories that start with "My name is so and so and here are some facts about me..." so I think that was my least favorite part about this. I didn't think the story was bad, I'm just not a fan of stories starting that way.
I think future chapters could be longer, because this one was pretty short. I'd like to see more things added in the chapter, even if it's just Jackson and Cassidy talking or something, that way there would be more going on.
Overall, I think the concept is pretty good, and I think Jackson and Cassidy could get into quite a few adventures on the set.
I think future chapters could be longer, because this one was pretty short. I'd like to see more things added in the chapter, even if it's just Jackson and Cassidy talking or something, that way there would be more going on.
Overall, I think the concept is pretty good, and I think Jackson and Cassidy could get into quite a few adventures on the set.