September 27th, 2013 at 07:50pm
@ brunettecutie04
omggggg
Fear of Flying - Comments
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September 27th, 2013 at 06:00pm
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@ sandrashameless
I think you should write a separate story of Alfie himself. That would be really interesting :)September 27th, 2013 at 05:55pm -
@ strawberrybubble
I'm so tooooorn lolSeptember 27th, 2013 at 05:48pm -
I agree with team Alfie, but I don't want her to be with him in case it doesn't work out. If she gets with Harry he'll always be a part of her life because she's friends with Eleanor. But I'm still totally team Alfie.September 27th, 2013 at 05:36pm
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Team Harry for the win!!! :D more soon please? :)September 27th, 2013 at 05:15pm
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@ cocopuffs
omgggg Douglas Booth basically is Alfie to a T!
we'll see what happens. there's things that have yet to come out and zayn still needs some redemption sooooooSeptember 27th, 2013 at 04:54pm -
@ Write.with.Love
welcome to my life!!!September 27th, 2013 at 04:50pm -
Her and Harry's scene was very cute but I mostly see them as best friends. I am part of team Alfie because he seems like the opposite of Zayn and I keep imagining him as Douglas Booth :) Alfie could help her get over Zayn especially since he has no connection with him and hopefully they will have some very cute and sexy scenes in the near future.September 27th, 2013 at 10:32am
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Update soon
Great story
Can't wait for moreSeptember 27th, 2013 at 10:27am -
I'm kind of team both, but I think I'm more partial to Harry because he's like a portion of my dream guy, but.... then so is Alfie.... I DON'T KNOW!September 27th, 2013 at 09:51am
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@ brunettecutie04
i'm really starting to love this story. but i think mainly because i just want to write Alfie. i should write a completely separate story of just him. omg her perfect okSeptember 27th, 2013 at 07:08am -
It's okay. It works. He can...far, far, far down the line, lol.
Omg, that scene was amazing :D I know exactly what you mean!
Sometimes I see one completely amazing scene in my head and then I end up writing a whole story just to have that scene and then go on with it.
I loved it...but this isn't new news lolSeptember 27th, 2013 at 06:54am -
@ brunettecutie04
i hate that i made Zayn out to be such a cunt lol but i'll eventually have a chapter where he redeems himself. idk when though, far down the line.
i've been waiting to write the harry scene with temporary tattoos since before i even STARTED this story. i was so stoked to write it!September 27th, 2013 at 06:45am -
Don't we always fall for the bad boy persona? It always happens. BTW YAY YOU POSTED IT. I really love this story. I've already told you but I LOVE Alfie! Very creative line "He just stole the bait and left" but it was also so sad :( I feel so bad for her. Zayn is such a bum. I LOVE HARRY he's so adorable! Remind me that if I'm ever down I want Harry coming at my aid! (P.S I'm writing these down as I read the story, lol).
Okay, so you obviously know I love Alfie too especially after our talk and your description. However, I'm still team Harry on this one. He's adorable. They're adorable and I still want to punch Zayn in the face.
I'm loving the new layout for the story. I'm loving the story and I can't wait until the next update! :DSeptember 27th, 2013 at 06:33am -
@ Caitlynnnn
it's gonna get good. plots are twisting and suchSeptember 16th, 2013 at 07:50pm -
Oh my goodness !!! Aw poor Kenny :(
But this had to happenSeptember 16th, 2013 at 03:09pm -
Well you already know what I think. But I'll say it again.
Zayn is an asshole! I'm hoping the things I stated may happen..HS love?! :) The chapter, as always, was amazing. I can't wait for what's planned next. It's going to be fun.
Plus, my offer still stands, the one to slap Zayn in the face.September 16th, 2013 at 06:17am -
@ conversecrazy13
i'm working on it :) hopefully another update this weekSeptember 9th, 2013 at 06:41am -
This is great! Please continue.September 9th, 2013 at 06:38am
:D