Wow. That's all I have to say. This was so beautifully written that I was a bit stunned. I loved how you described the scene around them. The way you worded some of the things was absolutely stunning. "And they walked away from there, smelling of watermelon smoke and heartbreakingly beautiful dreams" i absolutely loved that. 'heartbreakingly beautiful dreams' is by far my favorite thing in this whole thing. I just find it so beautiful yet so dark. I absolutely loved this, baby girl. Not because it was written for me, though that is a big part, but because of how it was written. I'm very proud of you and your writing. I really hope you continue to write more stories because you're magnificent. I've been dying to write a story with you! haha
Thank you for this. I love you!
Also, if I can't have Harry Styles I would love Oliver Styles. Though when I first read that bit I thought you said Oliver Sykes hahahahaha.
That's all I have to say.
This was so beautifully written that I was a bit stunned. I loved how you described the scene around them. The way you worded some of the things was absolutely stunning. "And they walked away from there, smelling of watermelon smoke and heartbreakingly beautiful dreams" i absolutely loved that. 'heartbreakingly beautiful dreams' is by far my favorite thing in this whole thing. I just find it so beautiful yet so dark. I absolutely loved this, baby girl. Not because it was written for me, though that is a big part, but because of how it was written. I'm very proud of you and your writing. I really hope you continue to write more stories because you're magnificent. I've been dying to write a story with you! haha
Thank you for this. I love you!
Also, if I can't have Harry Styles I would love Oliver Styles. Though when I first read that bit I thought you said Oliver Sykes hahahahaha.