The Perfect Mistake - Comments

  • Maddi;

    Maddi; (6100)

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    I think this story is good, but the idea for it is a little cliche. I've read so many stories where the band has to date another band for publicity, so it's really hard to make a story like this stand out from the tons of others that are like it.

    I think the girls are funny though, and Kelsey is my favorite character so far. Lexi is so sarcastic and funny, and I feel like Jenna and Harry are gonna end up together.

    I think this story could be good if you could find a way to step outside of the typical girlfriend for hire story, and I’d like to see you do that in the future.
    August 13th, 2013 at 04:47pm