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  • sfarrell13

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    update soon please!
    August 31st, 2013 at 04:12pm
  • sfarrell13

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    YES LOVE IT.
    August 31st, 2013 at 04:12pm
  • amaya.-.

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    aww, the way she shot Harry down when she went to take the call kind of made me feel bad for him :(

    Kind of.. :P

    Looking forward to your next update!

    -Xx
    August 31st, 2013 at 10:53am
  • Lawliet.

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    Ah I love this story! Just found it, and I'm already obsessed haha update again soooon
    August 31st, 2013 at 01:45am
  • sfarrell13

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    YES OKAY I LOVE THIS ONE TOO.
    August 29th, 2013 at 06:24pm
  • reader_666

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    aaaaaaa this is so perfect Very Happy Very Happy Very Happy
    August 27th, 2013 at 11:41pm
  • amaya.-.

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    I've got a feeling I'm going to like Sophia, haha. I really like the way you're writing this.

    Great job :)

    -Xx
    August 27th, 2013 at 11:47am
  • EVERLONG

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    Oooooh its getting good. I was wondering how they would cross paths again. And now I am again haha. Can't wait to read some more!
    August 27th, 2013 at 04:14am
  • McQueen

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    @ EVERLONG
    Wow, thank you so much! Your comment means so much to me. I really strive for a believable -- and maybe sometimes relatable-- plot. Also, YES, Sophia is literally the mini version of Gloria from Modern Family!! That wasn't even my intention at first but after a while, I realized they could probably be related. Thanks so much for reading, hopefully you'll enjoy the next chapter too! x
    August 26th, 2013 at 06:27pm
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    @ amaya.-.
    Haha thanks for reading! I hope you enjoy the next chapter, it's even funnier x
    August 26th, 2013 at 06:24pm
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    @ SomethingRandom.
    Thank you! That means so much to me. Truly. I'm trying to pay more attention to my writing style this time around because usually when I come up with a plot, I just want it all on paper immediately. I think you'll like the next chapter too :) x
    August 26th, 2013 at 06:23pm
  • McQueen

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    @ Dance1292
    I'm so happy you like it! I hope you like the next chapter that I'm posting tonight because it's one of my favorites xx
    August 26th, 2013 at 06:21pm
  • EVERLONG

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    This is great! I was hesitant to start reading at first cause I'm really fussy and I like decent storyline a and good grammar and you know the drill but this is fab! Your plot is different but not so different that its unbelievable which is always nice and your characters have a story which I loooove. I don't know if you meant for this to happen but Sophia reminds me of Gloria from Modern Family! Haha. And Jayden is just funny! I'm really enjoying it so far and can't wait to read more! Xo
    August 25th, 2013 at 12:47pm
  • amaya.-.

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    The chapter title made me grin, haha. Great way to introduce them to each other.
    I'm excited for this story! :)

    -Xx
    August 25th, 2013 at 10:47am
  • SomethingRandom.

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    Your writing skills are fantastic! Harry is a bit full of himself, isn't he? Oh well, I found this ultimately funny and I can't wait for the chapter that they formally introduce each other. Very Happy
    August 25th, 2013 at 04:01am
  • Dance1292

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    I absolutely adore this story! It's fantastic!
    August 25th, 2013 at 12:19am
  • McQueen

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    @ amaya.-.
    Spoelstra is actually the real coaches last name for the miami heat team! Hahaha! I tried to make this as realistic as possible. I'm so glad you're enjoying the story so far. Thanks for reading :)
    August 25th, 2013 at 12:15am
  • McQueen

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    @ we get so drunk
    Thank you!! I'm so glad you like it. Harry is in the next chapter...which I just posted. Teehee. Enjoy! x
    August 25th, 2013 at 12:12am
  • amaya.-.

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    I really like the start you've made so far.
    Interesting name, Spoelstra. Is that a real basketball reference? Cause it sounds kind of dutch :P I found it easy to read.

    Looking forward to your next chapter.

    -Xx
    August 24th, 2013 at 06:34pm
  • williamsma2

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    this is awesome! really super love it, and i cant wait for harry to be in it :D
    August 24th, 2013 at 02:02pm