@ EVERLONG Wow, thank you so much! Your comment means so much to me. I really strive for a believable -- and maybe sometimes relatable-- plot. Also, YES, Sophia is literally the mini version of Gloria from Modern Family!! That wasn't even my intention at first but after a while, I realized they could probably be related. Thanks so much for reading, hopefully you'll enjoy the next chapter too! x
@ SomethingRandom. Thank you! That means so much to me. Truly. I'm trying to pay more attention to my writing style this time around because usually when I come up with a plot, I just want it all on paper immediately. I think you'll like the next chapter too :) x
This is great! I was hesitant to start reading at first cause I'm really fussy and I like decent storyline a and good grammar and you know the drill but this is fab! Your plot is different but not so different that its unbelievable which is always nice and your characters have a story which I loooove. I don't know if you meant for this to happen but Sophia reminds me of Gloria from Modern Family! Haha. And Jayden is just funny! I'm really enjoying it so far and can't wait to read more! Xo
Your writing skills are fantastic! Harry is a bit full of himself, isn't he? Oh well, I found this ultimately funny and I can't wait for the chapter that they formally introduce each other.
@ amaya.-. Spoelstra is actually the real coaches last name for the miami heat team! Hahaha! I tried to make this as realistic as possible. I'm so glad you're enjoying the story so far. Thanks for reading :)
I really like the start you've made so far. Interesting name, Spoelstra. Is that a real basketball reference? Cause it sounds kind of dutch :P I found it easy to read.