Criminal - Comments

@ wavyyybabyyy
Thanks for the explanation :D

@ BrittanyMorgan
In Pagan/Wiccan (Witches) culture it has something to do with the number 11, apparently it's a master number which represents creativity, intuition & inspiration which are qualities Alister Crowley thought suited the word "magic". But, in modern times, some people use it to make sure people don't mistake it as like a Magicians Magic. It's kinda complex & hard to explain.

I love love loooooooooooooove this! I can't wait to see what happens next!

Hey! I've been reading this story for a while, and I really love it! You are a great writer! One question, why do you spell magic with a "k"???

Pft. AP classes, right? Finally got up to date with my reading and am LOVING IT!

Holy crap. I've been glued to my desk and computer for the past few hours reading this. Just WOW! The chapter where they were hanged I was seriously sitting here rocking back and forth sobbing, chanting "no, this can't be happening!" Very few stories have the power to make me cry! I LOVE the characters you've created and the depth they have to them. And I really like that the story just keeps getting more intricate. Please update soon! I need something to look forward through to get through finals!

This story reminds me of The Weaver's Source.. I enjoy reading this

amazing!

I so just read every chapter in a couple of hours O_O <333

I am way too in love with this story for my own good! You are a great writer, and your characters are very deeply written! I can't wait to see what you have up your sleeve. I'll be looking for the updates :D

I really like this story, like a lot. I'm completely in love with your characters. I think they should die at some point though, just not in the battle. Write a second book in another characters perspective. Or maybe just a few closing chapters. I don't know. But I do really love this story, I'm glad I came across it.

This is an amazing story! You are an extremely talented writer! Please update soon.

I really liked it! This is one of the most original stories I've read in a long time.

Keep it up!

Oh my god this story is amazing! I can't wait to hear idril's speech!

Love this chapter buuut there is a TON of spelling and grammar errors, not only that but I think you accidentally put different words than what you meant quite a few times!

Oh gawd!! This is such an awesome story!!

Finally I have been waiting ages for an update from this story!!! Great update as usual! cant wait for more

I am in loove with this!! I wish some more detail was put into why she was bawling her eyes out and collapsing or how she knew somethjng was going on when he was slaying the monster

MOOORE.

I think that this is well written and interesting.