Incubus. - Comments

God, I just read it, and I'm addicted... It would be really worth a sequel...

Hey so I read this when you first posted it but didn't comment so here I am. I loved this! The plot if this was really interesting and you wrote it very well. Mm Brian as an incubus is so hot! This seemed very realistic, it was interesting hearing that lady's story. Those kids were foolish not to believe her, the girl was smart though but unfortunately it didn't stop him from getting her. Of couse she would enjoy it, I know I would because I'm dirty like that. I really liked the ending. It looks like she'll be having a half human half demon child just like that woman. I wonder what her friend's reactions were. Anyways, this was really great :D

Well that escalated quickly

That was so hot! I really enjoyed it, thank you for recommending it to me

The whole concept behind this was really cool. I've never really read a story like this before, but I was pleasantly surprised! The plot was consistent and really well-thought out and the details were extremely vivid. Great job!

Wow that was amazing, you're such a good writer :)

@ AJ9
thank you babe! appreciate it :D xx

@ amabie.
I'm sure I'm not the only one who thought this was worth expanding. I hope not, anyway xx

@ AJ9
wow thanks! if enough people like it then yeah I guess I could add more :)

I loved this. It was really different and I would like to read more! I actually thought that Logan had turned into the demon 'Brian'. Please say you'll consider adding more to this?

Sounds interesting, can't wait!!

UPDATE NOW!!! I'm actually quite interested in reading it.

Can't wait for this! Please post soon xx