@ Perry_The_Platypus haha, no no. Just rethinking some things. I'm glad u liked it. What would u like to see in the future? Would u like to 'guest star' in the story?
@ jessicarockythompson Well I love the fact that she is thick! I love that she is a normal sized woman with hips, thighs, and an ass to match. I would love to see her rise to the occasions and be greater then what Bella could ever be. To be honest with you I think Bella is whiny and selfish and I just see Jessi as such a strong woman that it inspires me.
Love it, Jasper is actually calm and shy tht is good just focus in her being shy and it will all be good, can't wait to read more update as soon as u can :)