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  • My-Mental-Fiction

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    awww loved every second!
    You write such amazing descriptions of emotions and what not ! <3 Makes me all fuzzy inside >w<
    This is so amazing. You have no idea.
    June 11th, 2014 at 04:42pm
  • Chairman Meow

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    When Brian broke down, I just literally cried. Cry I know the feeling of losing a best friend. My own best friend passed away when I was 17 and it hurt so bad that I just didn't wanna feel anything anymore. But time heals everything, I guess. Brian, you're not alone. You have Matt and the rest of the band and your family. Arms Feel better, hun.

    Clap Oh the ending!! The ending was just simply perfect!! Urgh!!! I'm in love. In Love
    March 20th, 2014 at 05:14am
  • IWillMakeYouScream

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    That was simply amazing! I love how he got his Brian back
    March 16th, 2014 at 04:30am
  • Xxzackysangel6661Xx

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    So I'm crying a lot right now. I feel bad for the both of them. My heart broke reading this especially when Brian started talking about how he was feeling. Arms It was such and emotional story and I thought you did a great job with it.
    October 23rd, 2013 at 07:02pm
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    @ ToBeDetermined
    Arms thank you!
    September 19th, 2013 at 08:37pm
  • K.Monroe

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    I don't even know what to say. I'm just...ugh. It's so sad. I feel for Matt because he's having to look after Brian and he feels like he's lost the man he made that vow to, but when Brian finally expresses all of his feelings about losing Jimmy. It opened the floodgates.

    I've said it once and I'll say it again: You're an amazing writer!
    September 19th, 2013 at 08:26pm
  • Synful Cocktail

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    Shit... I'm like, crying. Holy fuck, the emotion and just the heartbreak... Oh my god.
    Poor Matty and Bri, but I'm happy they got happy ish with each other in the end!

    Ugh, crumpet.. you're far too talented for me! Just, you pulled me in straight away and I was hooked on every word written.
    September 17th, 2013 at 09:11am
  • heretic.

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    @ EzioAuditore
    Now I'm crying too xD
    I love you too, with all of my metaphorical heart Arms
    September 14th, 2013 at 11:26pm
  • EzioAuditore

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    I am not ashmaed to admit that I have cried like a bitch reading this, and I'm crying again now, xD

    Seriously. This story felt like so much more. I'm not sure if it's really because of what you have told me, but it was fucking intense and I don't remember the last time I had felt a story tug at my heart and make waterfalls appear on my face like this. It's all in a good way though, hun. You got emotion into this story perfectly. You couldn't have done it any better and a seriously doubt ANYONE could have. This story is perfect, as sad as it is. And writing wise, probably one of my favorites of you, honey.

    I was crying my eyes out read about Brian's feelings especially, and I guess inside I cried my eyes out for you (must admit). I'm not going to put too much of it into this comment, I just kind of feel like it's too private? But anyway. The words you used, you made it too fucking easy to really feel him. It pulled me in and I bet it did the same to each and every other reader. As much as I love when dramatic and sad stories touch me like this, I'm worried about my emotions now. XD

    It was heartbreaking to read it, too. Sad Not just about Brian's suffering from Jimmy's death. It was just as bad to read about how Matt suffered, too, and all the sorrow it came down to. I DONT WANT LIFE T BE THIS CRUEL. (WHY DID MY PC DECIDE TO PLAY SO FAR AWAY NOW DO I LOOK LIKE I CAN FUCKING TAKE IT?)

    Here's a fucking tight hug, and a round of applause for you, muffin. Arms I know this story wasn't easy to write, but you did an more than just amazing job. I can't really put it into words. It tore my soul into pieces, but it was beautiful. And as painful as the beginning was, I was swooning over the ending. It was so adorable, and so good to read about them helping one another, in such romantic way. And it was so realistic, too. It nearly killed me a bit. Everything about this story is perfect. You are perfect.

    Love you. Very much. Arms
    September 14th, 2013 at 11:15pm
  • AJ9

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    This was really emotional and extremely well written. I thoroughly enjoyed it, although it did make me cry Sad xx
    September 14th, 2013 at 03:06pm
  • StacieIerogeance

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    that made me cry with happiness, cuteness and saddness like so much emotion was put in this and it's amazing
    September 14th, 2013 at 05:44am
  • Rath

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    Amazing. That's all I can say.
    Absolutely amazing.
    September 14th, 2013 at 03:58am
  • Angelina Shadows

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    Wow, just wow. I'm at a loss of words. This was absolutely amazing! The death of Jimmy devastated us all, as well as the guys. I'm sure the guys drank quite a bit to drown out their sorrows. Poor Brian, poor Matt. I just can't even explain my thoughts into words. I didn't cry, but I could feel the emotions in the story and it did make me sad. It also made me smile at the end. You explained their love for each other so well. This was really well written. And again I'm sorry about your friend, I can't imagine what you went through but I know that it must have hurt pretty bad. Great job my friend, another amazing one shot. Sorry that this is so crappy but I'm really emotional right now and can't explain my thoughts and feelings into words right now.
    September 14th, 2013 at 01:53am