Well I will most definitely applaud you on your nightmare scene that was intense. It literally had me on the edge of the couch. The rest of the chapter is absolutely amazing. I can literally feel the fear coursing through Logan's veins in the beginning and then her determination in the end. Well done this was simply amazing. I shall wait patiently for the next update.
I am already in love with this. It's so amazing already. I love the idea as well. I think adding the anemia in there was a great idea and I think it adds just something more to Logan's character. I love how she's cold all of the time but she totally knows that it's not from the anemia. I also really loved the way you described Chris. Your attention to detail is literally one of my favorite things about your writing.
Your writing never fails to draw me in and make me want more as soon as I've finished reading an update. Let me steal your skills!! o-o An amazing start. Can't wait for more. <3