Sacred - Comments

There goes Will, running away again. I really wonder why it is he runs away so much. Did something happen in the past or something that caused this? Anyways, AWKWARD!!! Staying at your ex-boyfriend's house of all people but I guess he didn't really have anywhere else to go right then without getting caught. OH MY GOD...IS THAT ANDY AS IN ANDY?? Well, that was unexpected. Another great chapter. Now I must subscribe to this as well because it's soooo good. Please update soon and the other one as well. Alright, so I'm going to go to bed now since it's midnight. I'll be back tomorrow to read the other two stories and then do your blog.

So Andy finally told him, I'm glad he finally told someone. Oh no! Not Ace too. I don't blame Andy for not really believing him because he was drunk but then again it is a pretty serious thing and I would hope that someone even drunk wouldn't lie about something like that. I also don't blame him for avoiding him for awhile because I probably would've done the same but I'm glad he finally decided to face him and talk about it and he found out that Ace was telling the truth. It's good that he isn't alone but it's terrible that both of them have to go through something like that, it's terrible. I hope their dads get caught somehow and are put behind bars. I really liked this chapter. You are a good writer.

Damn Will you really did it now. Smh, punching your brother in the face was uncalled for and always running off. Now you have to go to Xavier House which isn't going to be fun at all.

Poor Andy, his father abusing him, that's messed up. I don't care if his father is trying to do the best for him, that is no excuse to hit somebody, especially you're own son. He obviously has a drinking problem and domestic violence. Where is his mother? He needs to talk to someone about it or better yet go to the police but I understand, he's scared. He needs to talk to someone about it but I understand that that isn't very easy to do either. Keeping all those feelings bottled up inside is not good though and he could end up doing something stupid. I really liked the first chapter of this.

Oh, they met! :D

Oh snap. This is getting intense, I wonder when Will and Andy will meet :P

This is really intense, and I can really feel the emotions going through every character. You have a knack for writing really dramatic situations without them coming across as being overdone, and I'm already really feeling for all of the characters. You're doing an amazing job and I can't wait to read more! :)

Oh I like the first chapter ((: