The Sun Is Out - Comments

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the layout; more of the content picture and stuff, is really cute. i think leaving the background a pure black would give us that dreading sense, but the cutesy orange makes me think twice about the content (since i haven't read it yet or anything).

onto the main part.

i see that you haven't capitalized any of the sentences or so, so it would be nice to professionally go back and re-do that, but that's just me. aside that, i don't know why i haven't stumbled upon your writings before because this is beautifully done and it took me a while to realize that this was a fan fiction *mindblown*

Hello!

I find this story too cute. I don't read fan-fiction often, and I'm not even a huge fan of 'One Direction.' Nevertheless, I love your story, and am waiting for the romance to happen!

I read the Author's note, but it would be better if you really fix the sentences, so that they all start with capitals!
Other than that, count me a fan!

Keep on writing . .

~ Verona :)