More! i was staring so hard at the screen my friend was wondering what i was reading haha. I''m definitely hooked. Your writing is so intense it makes me wish i was in the story.
And the part about the eye contact while she was masturbating...just..it was superb! I could literally feel the sexual tension between the two and relate to her frustration with Tom.
I'm anxiously waiting for more chapters, keep up the awesome work!