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  • monte100

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    @ Written-Amaya
    Thank you, I'm glad you enjoyed it.
    August 21st, 2013 at 08:55am
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    Amazing story! Absolutely love it! Good Job!
    August 21st, 2013 at 12:01am
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    @ henryuscola
    Thank you for your feedback
    August 20th, 2013 at 03:57pm
  • henryuscola

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    Great story! You did a good job on really letting the reader feel the environment it's very descriptive, you did not have a problem with grammar or spelling, your use of the English language is superb. You used words that made me look in the dictionary to find out what it meant.
    Great use of the paragraphs monte100 ill look forward to reading more soon. Very well written, you did good.
    August 20th, 2013 at 01:42pm
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