Can My Worst Nightmare Be My Greatest Dream - Comments

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    @KillJoySynner
    It's a sad chapter though. but I'm glad you liked it. It's probably going to get even more sad from here on until the end of the story.
    September 4th, 2013 at 02:14am
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    Aww! Such a beautifil chapter:')
    September 4th, 2013 at 02:11am
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    @ AllTimeLowIsMyLife14
    When I first started this story, i had looked at a picture of matt and his eyes looke green, thats the reason for that

    @ Candy_land
    Well she was going to escape in one chapter but he came out of the shower, and she pretty much didn't want to. As for the guy on stage, matt did that because he believed the guy deserved to to be publicly humiliated, plus there was security to take care of the police issue, but no, there wasn't much thought put into it. I usually start with a single idea and build off of it as i go
    September 1st, 2013 at 03:44pm
  • Candy_land

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    I like the idea of this story bit I don't think you have put enough thought into it. If she was kidnapped why hadn't she tried to escape? And matt bringing the guy on stage, why? Go to the police
    September 1st, 2013 at 07:49am
  • AllTimeLowIsMyLife14

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    Last time I checked Zacky V. Has the green eyes, not Matt. Matt has hazel eyes. I'm not trying to be mean its just I like it when authors are able to get their facts right, I'm sorry it's just that one detail bothered me a bit other then that I love the story!
    P.S, sorry I'm a bit OCD about basically everything.
    September 1st, 2013 at 07:25am
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    @ KillJoySynner
    You'll get to see what he was like through her flashbacks and dreams, but he was an awesome guy, wait till you actually meet Michael.
    September 1st, 2013 at 06:36am
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    :O whoa! Memph sounded like an awesome guy
    September 1st, 2013 at 06:28am
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    @ PixiStix
    Lol awesomeness:D
    August 31st, 2013 at 05:20am
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    @ KillJoySynner
    I'm glad you liked it. But as a fair warning, things are going to get worse from last chapter until towards whatever chapter i decide to make it better.
    August 31st, 2013 at 05:16am
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    Whoa! Loved how Matt was telling the fans and told Tony how he'll escape the fans
    August 31st, 2013 at 04:53am
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    @ KillJoySynner
    Just wait until you read the chapter I'm writing now.
    August 31st, 2013 at 02:00am
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    @ PixiStix
    Read the update.... freaking amazing!
    August 31st, 2013 at 01:54am
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    @ KillJoySynner
    lol, gotta add some drama. Lots more to come.
    August 31st, 2013 at 01:44am
  • KillJoySynner

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    Damnit Brian! Why did you do that???? Grrr! Loved it nonetheless and it would be an interesting twist with a supernatural aspect in it:)
    August 30th, 2013 at 04:51am
  • KillJoySynner

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    Oooh! Getting exciting!
    August 27th, 2013 at 01:27am
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    @ KillJoySynner
    Lol. I figured you'd like that. Just wait until we get further on into the story.
    August 21st, 2013 at 07:30pm
  • KillJoySynner

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    Yeah! Beat Val's asss! Love how Cayla can beat the drap outta ValXP
    August 21st, 2013 at 07:17pm
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    @ KillJoySynner
    I didn't even plan on that happening to be honest. I guess stuff like that just happens whenever you get in the flow of things. I guess we'll just have to go for more. I don't think I'm going to update again tonight though, I'll probably post some throughout tomorrow :)
    August 21st, 2013 at 05:46am
  • KillJoySynner

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    They met before? No way! That really got my eyes wide open and mouth dropped. Very excited for more:)
    August 21st, 2013 at 05:44am
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    @ KillJoySynner
    I'm glad you liked it, I think I might have him be controlling throughout the whole book (in a good way though)
    August 21st, 2013 at 04:45am