Green Ribbon, Green Ribbon - Comments

I have the book that has the original version of this :)

I loved your version :)

@ pallid.
Ah thank you darling. That meant a lot

Ahh, oh my god, this was so fantastic. The ending was amazing.
Without even reading your reply to a comment, I imagined Lulu's head falling off when the ribbon came off. SO good. Now I just have this feeling; like this was a horrific romance, one with horror and death. She was sad because she was dead and if I don't stop now even though I have many of sentences running on in my head, I'll end up analyzing this story. I JUST LOVED IT OKAY? It was so good.

(P.S. - I clicked the link and then went 'meh' and closed it because I liked your version of the story more.)

@ darkaly
Thank you this is basically it: I just thought I'd make the ending a little more vague and nicer than saying her head fell off

This was really good and great and sweet and the ending was nice too i just don't know what to get out of it. And I guess that was the point but yes I loved it!