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  • Grimm.

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    I like it. However I find it hard to read with the paragraphs squished together like that, try possibly spacing them out? Other than that, great job. Can't wait for more.
    December 15th, 2013 at 07:42am
  • crazgirl1990

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    thanks so much BlueEyedAngel2
    August 21st, 2013 at 08:48pm
  • BlueEyedAngel2

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    Awesome start cant wait.for more
    August 21st, 2013 at 05:55pm
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