Truth Be Told, I Never Was Yours - Comments

  • RiverAsphodel92

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    Yes a new update finally! :)and it's okaymy grandpa is n a better place . Oh btw Thanks for giving me advice .My story is getting better and I can't wait to put it on here.! :) and it's 3am iin the morning and the part about Grandpa brought tears to my eyes :). And it didn't take Daphne too long to apologize but we all know how will the conversation will be between her and Kylie. And Aunt Shelly. And I agree with misskatie34. I'm suspicious too. Loved the new chapter. :)
    As for Hockey I'm not as much as a big fan towards it but the fights-- time to time-- in the games are very entertaining to watch. And the players just risk getting roughed up lol. So I respect the sport. Mr. Green Cool
    March 26th, 2014 at 08:02am
  • misskatie34

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    Hockey!!!!! Seattle doesn't have a NHL team so I cheer on my Seattle Thunderbirds in the WHL :) (I'm travelingkatielynne on Tumblr!)

    Happy to see an update from this! I'm suspicious of Daphne's confession, though.
    March 26th, 2014 at 07:08am
  • redcurlygirl_45

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    Omg, I just read all of this and I love this story so much!! Can't wait to read some more!! Hope you update soon!
    March 17th, 2014 at 11:59pm
  • Marvelgeek1029

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    This is amazingĀ” its so fasinating and it has an icredible story lineĀ” i love this so much and i do hope that you continue because it is really worth the read. :)
    March 15th, 2014 at 12:09am
  • LucyTheLion

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    This is so freaking amazing, I swear to god. I don't think I've ever read anything like that. Please please PLEASE continue. I can't wait for the next part. :)
    March 14th, 2014 at 09:23am
  • misskatie34

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    I can't wait for the next chapter!!
    March 9th, 2014 at 03:02am
  • Formaldehyde.

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    First off, anything with Benedict Cumberbatch is going to make me happy!

    Your descriptions are beautifully written and really go with the atmosphere of the story. They change from whimisical to moody to something that makes our hearts flutter. You know how to capture an audience with an interesting storyline to start with, but when you add in your word choice and how you portray the settings, everything becomes so well matched.

    Your main character, Kylie, is someone who is instantly likeable. The way you explain her constant battle of deciding whether to stay with her husband and go off with Ben is very well written and realistic. You let the reader into her mindset and the way she tries to decipher things, as well as show how truly happy she is when she's with Ben. The description of her situation is well executed and instantly causes the reader to put themselves in her position which is a powerful thing to do.

    I've only read the first few chapters but I can already tell this story holds a lot of promise! This is really great. Cute
    March 7th, 2014 at 12:51am
  • ajf111

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    god this story makes my day!!
    March 4th, 2014 at 02:58am
  • kcollins720

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    I agree with misskatie34. It does feel more like a novel then a fic because its that good. Every time I see there has been an update I get excited. I can't wait for more as always.
    February 24th, 2014 at 07:54pm
  • misskatie34

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    This feels like a novel more than a fic - it's that good. I look forward to every new chapter!
    February 24th, 2014 at 03:04am
  • CaptainRawr

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    You may not understand how awesome it feels to read your updates after a long time. It's like I can shove aside all my studies for just a minute and I feel myself flying to Cumberbatch-land. Supercalifragalisticexpialidociously amazing update. I can feel Kylie's emotions dripping from the screen! Update soon! ;)
    February 23rd, 2014 at 10:45am
  • DreamALittleDream

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    Oh my gosh, i love this so much! I have said this before and i will say it again because i cant stress how much i mean it; this is the best Benedict fan fic out there. Everytime i see that you have updated i get so excited just to read it because i know it's going to be awesome. I really love it and you an amazing writer. <3
    February 22nd, 2014 at 12:53pm
  • QueenSuperficial

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    Wow, glad she stuck up for herself! The last line was awesome. I loved it!
    February 22nd, 2014 at 11:42am
  • a beautiful lie;

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    Oh my god this is amazing, I love it. :) Can't wait for an update!
    February 22nd, 2014 at 08:52am
  • patti1022

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    I just read all 28 chapters and I am absolutely in love with this story. My grandmother would call Kylie's aunt and sister jelly beans. They are totally jealous of Kylie's success, her caring nature and her hot "boyfriend." Benedict has such a positive impact on Kylie's self esteem and self worth since she was able to stand up to her sister and aunt. I am so proud of Kylie for standing up for herself.
    I cannot wait until the next update. Now I must go to bed. :)
    February 22nd, 2014 at 08:22am
  • Red The Small

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    Beautiful <3 I was anticipating the lash-out! Well written and worth the wait!
    February 22nd, 2014 at 02:27am
  • hey sailor

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    But I keep expecting a Scooby Doo reference.
    February 22nd, 2014 at 12:36am
  • hey sailor

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    Grr, Shelly and Daphne piss me off so much dude.
    February 22nd, 2014 at 12:35am
  • KathrynReinert

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    I was so happy when I see you updated :)
    February 21st, 2014 at 10:25pm
  • HardcoreChick96

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    I'm sorry but I would knocked Shelly on her ass. But that's just me lol Great update!
    February 21st, 2014 at 05:37pm