The Day You Fell Apart - Comments

oh and im new to this story !!

ive jst read the 2 chapters and omg u can say im hooked !!! i Love ALL ur stories keep this up !!!

There's not much I can say on this one.
It was different but great. I loved it really.
Didn't think I would. But I did.

Tommy Pickles. I can't get over it either. :D

Jonah. I can't get him out of my head. I can't. Oh God.

This story makes me so bipolar.

I'm glad you got more attention on this story. It really is brilliant.

It has depth. Real depth. It was great.

Oh Jonah. -_-'

Well. Yeah. I'm running out of commenting juice. But I love this. <3 (note: love, not loved.)

This was an amazing story
I cried so many times through out the whole story
I love it!

This story was really sad but also great. I enjoyed reading it and I'm glad Jill was able to move on.

Uhm, is the guy's name seriously 'Tommy Pickles'? As in like Rugrats?! Sorry, I couldn't get over that.

I really like the story. It evoked emotions nicely. Although it could have gone better, I'm not disappointed with the ending.

You're a great writer. :)

I just stayed up til midnight reading this story.
And it was amazing.
Totally worth it.
I have to say, I did not see the ending coming.... I still can't quite believe it.
But wow.
Awesome job.

wow..that was really sad..I feel as if the ending was somewhat cold, it was good but I think I just hate that he gets taken away when he wasn't the only one that had contributed to Evans death.

hi :)
I know I'm really late for commenting on the story,
but i would like to say i think the whole thing is... how do you put this. AWESOME!!!
the end was kinda sad though.
I think this is one of my favorite stories on mibba, and i think the way you pieced it all together was fantastic. :)
I'm sorry this is so late :P
=)

Sad ending, but excellent nonetheless.
Cos Happy Endings don't always have to take the spotlight (:

Aw. I love your stories. I honestly don't think you ended it badly, but I criticize things I do all the time so yeah. Anyways good job, it made me want to cry, in a good way. Can't wait for your next story!

Wow. ..... That wasn't a bad ending at all ... It was honest ... real .....
I love you too! As a author ... you're amazingly .. wow .. .... you're really great at it ...
So .. yeah. I think I like your writing more than anyone's on here ... and more than anyone's I've read ..... just .. wow ... You deserve like a medal or something ... xD

Aw... I don't want it to be over T.T
But it was a beautiful ending :3
I'm on the verge of tears. Only reason I'm not crying is cuz I just got up and am still a bit tired, not operating fully xD
I Loved It!

this was such an amazing story
i seriously love it
the ending was so sad and the last two chapters made me cry(as stupid as that sounds), but overall it was amazing

ohmigosh.
it's ended?!
wow.
i think it was a nice ending. (:

would there be a sequel by any chance?

Can I honestly say that I'm mad that you ended the story like that?
BUT, I still love the chapter and the whole story.
AND, I cried in that chapter.
OH! And, now you have time to do The Carousel.
[:

Oh my God.... that was probably one of your best chapters yet. I mean it was seriously so amazing it had me on the brink of tears.. im surprised i wasnt actually crying.. but i was almost.. it was so sad but brilliant.. and now we understand why jonah was so give and take..

amazinggggg :D i was kinda confused about the italics and the regular writing. whose p.o.v was that? anyways that was good! writie soon!

what are you talking about???
that was a fucking amazing chapter.
this story is seriously one of the best ive ever read.
xx

I love this story!
Omg, this chapter was so sad :'(
I cried a little.