The Day You Fell Apart - Comments

Heylo. Are you craaazyy? I'm not sure that chapter could get any better, I'm practically crying right now. It was absolutely amazing just like the rest of your stories. Keep up the awesomeness :]

Whoa ...... I don't even know what to say that was so good. I can say I haven't cried .. especially over a book/story in so long ... and a tear actaully fell while I was reading ... You're an amazing author... and I can't believe you actually thought that chapter wasn't good ..... just ... wow. I hope to see the second part of that since you mentioned it ... just .... wow ... you're amazing .....

WOW. WOW. WOW. WOW.
omigosh.
How can you think that the chapter isn't good?
I cried! x]

It was so sad, but it was spectacular.
Your chapters are always worth the wait.
I mean it too.

Update the Carousel too?

that was so sad yet amazing.
i love this story.
:]

WOW.
That's all I can say about chapter 19.
It was, is, so touching, and heartbreaking and... and... just...
WOW.
More soon?

i loved chapter 19.
and i did listen to that perishers song.
you're right, it is amazing.
but so is your chapter.
and i'm not lying, so be proud of it, ok?
elliexo

That chapter was so sad.
I swear there was a little tear rolling down my cheak near theend of it!
update soon?

=]

wow..
that was sad
I got a little teary eyed lol

:o wowness. now i shall wait in agony for the next chapter. pleeeassse post it soon. really good job by the way :]

omg ur story is amazzing
i really didnt see that coming
cant wait for gthe next chapterr
<3

omg!!! i soooo did not see that one coming!!!

ahh. im speechless!!!!

awesome
:]]

woah!
major cliffhanger!

i absolutely love this story. My friend told me to read it so I did and it's absolutely amazing. You are a great writer, and I can't wait to find out where this is going.

xx

i KNEW IT! i so knew jonah's secret!

this story is so good!!!

Wow. I definatly was not expecting that.
How did he do it? why?
ahh.
Stopping there is silly because now I'm going to be all like restless.
I hope you update soon!

=]

wow! big shocker right there. but please do update more! :D

I'm really diggin' Chapter 18.
I obviously love the story, so great job.

AHH! How can you just end it like that? 17's ending is just so AHHHH!
I'm not so good with the whole cliff hanger thing.
Good job!

My jaw fell to the floor at the last line! OMG! I can't wait to know what her reaction to it is...oh boy...

wow. this story is amazing! :]

I soo seen that one coming

f-ck that would hurt to know that you dated the guy that killed your other boyfriend...