The Day You Fell Apart - Comments

I'm Lovin' it!! Holy crap, Cliffhanger much??!?! Any who. YAY you rock Dobby's sox :)

O.O
I'm a new reader to the story, and it's fantastic. I was crying earlier >.<
OMG, u has to update! I gotta know how she's gonna react. I've got a hunch about wats gonna happen, But I gotta know!
-subscribes-
More soon?

OMG he what? actually i figured it out about 3/4 ways through the chapter but i dnt kno why i didnt think of it earlier in the story.. but hey yup youre that good..
hurry up and get the next chapter up.. i wanna know her resction.. its killing me here!

hey i just started reading this story and i think its absolutely amazing.
you're such a good writer, keep it up
i love this

xx

OMFG!!!!That was sooooooo unexpected, I thought he mite of killed someone but evan was never in my mind jeez that was amazing!!!!! I love this story and can't wait for the next one!!!!! Plz don't make me wait a lot!!

oooh, i didn't see that coming you sneaky girl =D

Wow 0.o I was reading .. and just reading ... and then I got to the part when she got to the house and I was like "Aahhh! He killed Evan.." But then I wasn't sure ... so I kept on reading ... and ... wow... that's shocking 0.0 Man, I hope you update soon. You have no clue how agonizing it is to read your story and have you stop on such suspenseful parts, and you just ..... don't update for a while ..... Man.. lol .. Okay, I'm done rambling ... I'm still in shock ... I really like it =D

OMIGOSH!
Jonah did what?!
Update, update, update!

And update on the Carousel too.
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this is flippin amazing
it made me cry
you are an amazing writer

I dont think it was short or uneventful. I like it. It actually made me sad but in a good way lol. Can't wait for more chapters from both stories. :]

Ah! Jonah, Jonah, Jonah! What in the world could he be up to?

yay! another update.. but WHY is jonah doing this? GOD WHY??!!

hi!! ohmigosh. i totally remember reading your other story " say anything " like a few months back and i totally loved it! and then, i remember reading a couple of chapters of this story too. but i don't know what happened to it.

and guess what? i found it again today! if that's a pic of you on your profile, you are really pwetty. but aniwaes, i'm here to praise the story! i love the fact that you write ORIGINAL fiction and not unrealistic fan fiction crap like 80% of authors on mibba does. :D

this story is just soooo captivating. i like it how you add like a hint of mystery into your stories. like that bit about her meeting jonah before. but then again, it wasn't possible? like, i totally wanna find out where that came from (: oh and the totally mysterious character known as jonah. like what game is he playing at? taking her virginity and then like, ignoring her? wtf? which "boyfriend" does that??!! well, i guess i've gotta wait and find out huhs?

totally can't wait for the next update cos' i love this story soooo much. :D

I'm a new reader (kindof anyway...)
I really love this story!

=]

i lovee this storryy!
hahaha
but yah i agree^^^ jonah is being lame
ohh by the wayy did you know that your chapters are kinda getting cut off at the end?
justt so ya know. haha

I LOVE THIS STORY!!!
But Jonah is being an asshole =(
I thought he was cool at first though ......
Not now ... nope .. =S
But I still love this story ... I'm litterally adicted to it ... =3
I really can't wait for the next chapter ... curiosity will make me go insane .. screw the cat =P

jeez what is wrong with him? he says he loves her and then like acts like a complete ass...

YAY! You are back! Awesome new update! :D Can't wait for more.

YAY! you updated!
i think this is one of your best chapters yet..
who knew jonah was gonna be an ass?
i love it.. 'its war'

loved the update.
it was amazing.
and i'm glad you're back.