Screaming Slience - Comments

Here judging the first round of Sixth Time's the Charm!

Even though this is short and to-the point, I like it. It brings across this blunt aspect of the narrator's character, almost as if he or she is bitter about whatever killed the person underneath the grave stones. I get the feeling that they have so much to say to this person, but when it came to saying it, they weren't there any more to say all of those things to. I don't know if that's why the narrator is so mad or whether it's something else, but it's that aspect of the unknown that really interests me. You could read this piece a thousand times and get a different view of it each time.

I don't know how you managed to write such an interesting piece in such a short span of words, but well done!

@ CoolStory.Lynn
Sass is my division

Love it. "Send my regards to Satan"

That was intense right down to the ending. Very well done c:

@ domi823
@ Armybrat
Thank you both very much

Wow! I read the review of this piece and decided to read it. It isn't what I expected at all but it is really well written and a very profound piece. Well done!

Whoa O_O I wasn't expecting that ending. But great job!